Expand on your work experience. You switched from Job 1 to Job 2, because it opened up career opportunities? How? You've used the sentence "help companies perform better" in several places. Unless you're a CXO who turns the company around, I wouldn't really use that sort of language. Talk about hard facts. Did your work result in higher sales targets? Did you land a big client? Be specific, not vague. If you don't have specific targets, talk about what you learned and how you grew. How did you realize you were "capable of something bigger?"
You need to improve your reasons for choosing UCW and Canada. Talking about the accreditation and how "similar institutions don't exist in India" is not enough, I'm afraid. I know, for one, that reputed institutes like Indian School of Business (ISB) exist, and renowned internationally too. UCW is based in Vancouver. Talk about why you chose to study in that city, too. That may help.