Hey man, i would suggest you to go with GCMS route, as you can see from my experience... i applied second time without the notes and strong SOP..still got rejected. get the notes and make your SOP around the reasons mentioned there.
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Rejected twice...need advice.
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R u leader of NDP party?
Hey Guys,
I applied for GCMS notes and have got the reply. Here is the summary:
All information before me, including applicants previous employment and educational history has been reviewed. Applicant has B.Comm(2016) and has been employed since 2017, most recently as a sales exec. Applicant wants to attend GLOBAL BUSINESS MANGEMENT COURSE at SAULT COLLEGE. Mark sheets provided indicate poor academic record in some subjects. I am not satisfied that applicant will be able to successfully complete the study program in Canada. The applicant has failed to satisfy me that pursuing the selected program of study is reasonable given the high cost of international study in Canada when weighed against potential career/employment benefits after completion.
Considering previous academic qualification, employment history, relevance of the proposed course of study and factors such as travel history, I am not satisfied that applicant is a bona fide student who would depart Canada at the end of the period authorized for stay. Application refused.
Please let me know how I can cover the above points in my SOP to apply for a second time so that my application is accepted.
Thanks
I applied for GCMS notes and have got the reply. Here is the summary:
All information before me, including applicants previous employment and educational history has been reviewed. Applicant has B.Comm(2016) and has been employed since 2017, most recently as a sales exec. Applicant wants to attend GLOBAL BUSINESS MANGEMENT COURSE at SAULT COLLEGE. Mark sheets provided indicate poor academic record in some subjects. I am not satisfied that applicant will be able to successfully complete the study program in Canada. The applicant has failed to satisfy me that pursuing the selected program of study is reasonable given the high cost of international study in Canada when weighed against potential career/employment benefits after completion.
Considering previous academic qualification, employment history, relevance of the proposed course of study and factors such as travel history, I am not satisfied that applicant is a bona fide student who would depart Canada at the end of the period authorized for stay. Application refused.
Please let me know how I can cover the above points in my SOP to apply for a second time so that my application is accepted.
Thanks
Mention your poor academics in your new SOP and how you will improve upon them.
State why you want to do the specific program and how it is beneficial to you back in your home country.
The course of study is reasonable given the high cost of international study in Canada when weighed against the potential career employment benefits -
Here you wanna explain in your SOP, comparing local programs against Canadian programs. How the cheaper and more affordable program in Network engineering in your home country are not the right choice for you, why it is important for you to pay attain highly expensive Canadian education.
Educational documents submitted reflect poor scholastic performance and multiple unexplained backlogs -
It is crucial to give a proper justification/explanation on why you had those backlogs in the first place. There could be different reasons, one that could come to my mind right now maybe some medical concerns around the time you attended that test. Other could be you focused on core subjects more. Here you would want to explain other scholastic achievements that are relevant to your proposed course. Basically, you want to explain even after having a backlog, how you're still the best candidate to do that course in Canada.
I hate to be the bearer of negative input, but it appears to me that your application contains fundamental deficiencies that are very difficult to overcome. This is now compounded by 2 SP refusals. I do not believe a strong SOP would help in your case as it would not, in all likelihood, outweigh what is bothering the average VO when assessing your file. The deficiencies I am referring to are:
1- PG Diploma as opposed to Masters
2- Poor scholastic history
3- Backlog
4- High costs VS potential career gains back home
The travel history is not a major factor in the decision making process in my opinion. It is probably an element the VO resorts to when putting things in balance in attempt to sway their decision one way or the other.
One question if you don't mind; did you work with a consultant on your application or did you go for it on your own?
Well I only had one refusal and after that I applied for GCMC notes and got the reply that I quoted from the notes. I believe you misunderstood my post to be tahirk's post (where he had rejection twice) while replying to me.
But anyways, first - The global management program is a post graduate certificate program - I do not know if its a problem for VO. Second - I do not have a backlog - just have poor scores in some subjects in graduation.
Now I know it will be difficult to cover the points/quote form the NOTES reply that I received (which I have also quoted in my previous post) but I only have an option of an improved, well written (covering the all points of rejection) SOP to put forward now.
