Writing a Strong SOP

[Priyavart Rajain]

Hey guys , can anyone tell what do mean by a "strong" SOP
What should i write in there?
I have written about myself , my interests , hobbies , why i chose the course , why i chose that university , why i chose canada , and mentioned about my future goals and clearly written that i will return to india after course completion and help my homecountry progress. I have also mentioned that my guardians have enough funds to support my education.

What else should i mention?

 

[Baha.A.T]

Thats good, however you should also attach a course recoomendation letter from your employer stat8ng how you're new course will improve your company's performance and that you'll be welcomed back to work after you're done with

 

[Priyavart Rajain]

I am going for bachelors bro , completed my 12th in 2017 , i don't have that recommendation etc.

 

[Baha.A.T]

Then you're