Work experience proof - employment letter

[raich]

Please check it out, my company is providing below sample reference letter ... does it work?

Mr. XYZ XYZ (BA)
S/O Mr. XYZ XYZ

abcd@gmail.com
ALPERTON RD. 200
KOL-10, WB, INDIA


To Whom It May Concern

This is to certify that Mr. XYZ XYZ has employed as a BA at XXXXXX Pvt. Ltd and his positional category was Full-Time and Permanent. His monthly salary has been increased from Rs. 12,000.00 to Rs. 15,000.00
(Rs.1,80,000.00 Annual CTC) on February, 2014 based on his performance evaluation report.

Employee Details:

Birth Date ----------- Job Title Business Analyst (BA)
Joining Date ---------- Job Category Full-Time
Last Working Date --- Department Software Development
Daily Working Hour 9 Hours Reporting Supervisor Mr. Sujoy Basak(Project Manager)
Weekly Working Days 5 Days Monthly Salary 15,000.00 Rs. (14,890.00 Rupees after deduction
professional tax of 110 Rs.)

Core Duties and Responsibilities:

• Requirement gathering by identifying client’s need
• Project and business requirement analysis
• Prepare Business, Function and Data Requirement document along with system requirement specification
• Data Entity and Attribute identification and Relationship Design
• Comprehensive DFD and CR Implementation Analysis
• Involve in Functional and UAT Testing
• Research and Analysis for improving application quality and security
• Application demonstration and post implement performance monitoring

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us.

For (Company Name)


<Signature of the Referee> <Company Seal>
<Name & Designation of the Referee>
<Contact No. and Email of the Referee>

 

[Stanlee]

Please check it out, my company is providing below sample reference letter ... does it work?

Mr. XYZ XYZ (BA)
S/O Mr. XYZ XYZ

abcd@gmail.com
ALPERTON RD. 200
KOL-10, WB, INDIA


To Whom It May Concern

This is to certify that Mr. XYZ XYZ has employed as a BA at XXXXXX Pvt. Ltd and his positional category was Full-Time and Permanent. His monthly salary has been increased from Rs. 12,000.00 to Rs. 15,000.00
(Rs.1,80,000.00 Annual CTC) on February, 2014 based on his performance evaluation report.

Employee Details:

Birth Date ----------- Job Title Business Analyst (BA)
Joining Date ---------- Job Category Full-Time
Last Working Date --- Department Software Development
Daily Working Hour 9 Hours Reporting Supervisor Mr. Sujoy Basak(Project Manager)
Weekly Working Days 5 Days Monthly Salary 15,000.00 Rs. (14,890.00 Rupees after deduction
professional tax of 110 Rs.)

Core Duties and Responsibilities:

• Requirement gathering by identifying client’s need
• Project and business requirement analysis
• Prepare Business, Function and Data Requirement document along with system requirement specification
• Data Entity and Attribute identification and Relationship Design
• Comprehensive DFD and CR Implementation Analysis
• Involve in Functional and UAT Testing
• Research and Analysis for improving application quality and security
• Application demonstration and post implement performance monitoring

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us.

For (Company Name)


<Signature of the Referee> <Company Seal>
<Name & Designation of the Referee>
<Contact No. and Email of the Referee>

Looks good to me. It would be better if you can detail the duties and responsibilities a bit more, as the current one looks technical and the case officer may not know all terms. Look up on Google, you will get many posts on duties and responsibilities of a BA.