they have your passport number, name, DOB,fingerprint etc etc, so it does not matter.
IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.
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Yeah, haven't gone through each and every post. Mostly skimming through with focus on essay review posts.
Understand your view point on how Ielts is a money making scheme.. siphoning money from us, aspirants...
Hi All,
Can anyone evaluate my writing task 1 and provide
Write a letter recommend someone to work in a company
Who the person is
How did you know the person
Working experience of the person
Why do you recommend the person
Hello Mr. Sam,
I am writing to give a reference of one of my friend for the job posted by your organization on LinkedIn. My friend's name is Susheel Kumar and hw has rich experience in the IT field suitable to the job requirements you have posted.
Moreover, he is not only my friend but I have worked with him in my previous organization for 2 years. He has 8 years of versatile experience of working on various technologies and under his mentorship and technical guidance, he has achieved success in various projects and win recommendations of his many clients.I am attaching link of his Linkedin profile for your reference with this email.
Though he has started his career from a very small organization but nowadays he is working with big clients such as Pearson. In addition, he has participated in many conferences overseas and has achieved many certifications.
My main reason of recommending him is his thorough and precise knowledge on all subjects and he experience can become an strong factor for the success of your start-up product furthermore he also liked your product idea and shown his interest in joining you team. I hope you will like his profile.
Awaiting for your response.
Thank You
Preeti Sharma 17th March, 2019
Can anyone evaluate my writing task 1 and provide
Write a letter recommend someone to work in a company
Who the person is
How did you know the person
Working experience of the person
Why do you recommend the person
Hello Mr. Sam,
I am writing to give a reference of one of my friend for the job posted by your organization on LinkedIn. My friend's name is Susheel Kumar and hw has rich experience in the IT field suitable to the job requirements you have posted.
Moreover, he is not only my friend but I have worked with him in my previous organization for 2 years. He has 8 years of versatile experience of working on various technologies and under his mentorship and technical guidance, he has achieved success in various projects and win recommendations of his many clients.I am attaching link of his Linkedin profile for your reference with this email.
Though he has started his career from a very small organization but nowadays he is working with big clients such as Pearson. In addition, he has participated in many conferences overseas and has achieved many certifications.
My main reason of recommending him is his thorough and precise knowledge on all subjects and he experience can become an strong factor for the success of your start-up product furthermore he also liked your product idea and shown his interest in joining you team. I hope you will like his profile.
Awaiting for your response.
Thank You
Preeti Sharma 17th March, 2019
I always thought you cleared it in your 7th attempt, but to clear it in 10 is some resilience. You explain it perfectly. I just hope we can broker a deal before the $5,000 provision
. I would have given up long ago.You guys are the reason that has kept me going until now.
Guys I have found the response to fill when they ask the reason for taking the IELTS test. My response - I am taking the test to asses the correctness of IELTS marking and further proceed legally if any discrepancies observed in bands deserved vs. bands given. they will debar me from appearing in the exam
they will debar me from appearing in the exam
Guys interesting read... Reveling the IELTS business.
https://www.scribd.com/document/371937797/University-of-British-Columbia-Human-Trafficking-Crimes
https://www.scribd.com/document/371937797/University-of-British-Columbia-Human-Trafficking-Crimes
can anyone evaluate my essay? Thanks in advance.
Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving behind only old people in countryside. What problem does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays, more adults tend to abandon the rural areas to live in major cities resulting in an increased population of senior people in the urban side. Consequently, it would disturb the workflow of the countryside. The government should attract young individuals to live in rural areas by providing them better opportunities and standard of living.
Firstly, the one problem which could arise due to migration of youngers to big cities and increased number of old people in the countryside is the unbalance of the workflow. As senior individuals are not very healthy and fit to carry out the laborious work required in farming and crop production, this would result in a decline of agricultural products and subsequently, would increase their cost. Secondly, a large number of adults leaving villages mean lack of trained staff in healthcare and education sector because senior staff would not be enough to provide all the services on their own. As a result, inadequate facilities in health and education would render villages deserted by most people.
To mitigate this problem, the government should facilitate the younger farmers by providing them funding and equipment. To illustrate, agricultural loans and farming machinery can be provided by the state which would attract adult people to invest in agriculture. Moreover, the state should also give incentives for young trained individuals to stay and work in rural schools and healthcare centers. Thus, more and more people will be attracted to the villages for high salaries and advantages.
In conclusion, a growing number of adults leaving villages rendering only old people to be left behind is a grave concern. In this regard, governments need to make policies to keep young people away from migrating to cities by providing them better opportunities in crop production, healthcare, and education sector.
Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving behind only old people in countryside. What problem does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays, more adults tend to abandon the rural areas to live in major cities resulting in an increased population of senior people in the urban side. Consequently, it would disturb the workflow of the countryside. The government should attract young individuals to live in rural areas by providing them better opportunities and standard of living.
Firstly, the one problem which could arise due to migration of youngers to big cities and increased number of old people in the countryside is the unbalance of the workflow. As senior individuals are not very healthy and fit to carry out the laborious work required in farming and crop production, this would result in a decline of agricultural products and subsequently, would increase their cost. Secondly, a large number of adults leaving villages mean lack of trained staff in healthcare and education sector because senior staff would not be enough to provide all the services on their own. As a result, inadequate facilities in health and education would render villages deserted by most people.
To mitigate this problem, the government should facilitate the younger farmers by providing them funding and equipment. To illustrate, agricultural loans and farming machinery can be provided by the state which would attract adult people to invest in agriculture. Moreover, the state should also give incentives for young trained individuals to stay and work in rural schools and healthcare centers. Thus, more and more people will be attracted to the villages for high salaries and advantages.
In conclusion, a growing number of adults leaving villages rendering only old people to be left behind is a grave concern. In this regard, governments need to make policies to keep young people away from migrating to cities by providing them better opportunities in crop production, healthcare, and education sector.
Hello All,
I tried many attempts in IELTS and i kept falling due to the bad score in ielts writing. I got overall 7.5 in 4 times but i can't achieve 7.0 in writing. I hope this forum could help me improve my writing.
Can anyone evaluate my writing task 2 below. Thank you in advance.
Question: In countries where there is high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argued that we should only provide higher education to students in countries where people can easily find a job after graduation. However, in my opinion, I totally disagree with this statement because of the important role of secondary education to our society which will be discussed below.
The first reason is that further education are unreplaceable in providing quality labor resources in all countries. Disregarding the unemployment rate, every year, there are demands in the job market for high skills workers who were trained in universities. If secondary education were closed, no one could become doctors, lawyers, financial analyst or scientists. As a results, the economy and society of those countries will be decreased. For example, in 2017, many universities in Turkey were closed and led to the chaos among Turkish society when a large proportion of intelligent students in Turkey went abroad to continue their education.
Secondly, I believe that higher education is a key to foster a country economy and at the same time, solve the problem of unemployment. In many countries, when the education system was very poor and people could not go to school, the country economy only could depend on its agriculture and several mining industries. However, thanks to the advance of education, many new business operations are established, help the economy grow and attract many job in new sectors like IT. In addition, tertiary education itself is a major service industry which create many jobs such as university faculties and staffs. Therefore, it is very important to maintain secondary education beside primary education.
In conclusion, although it is debated that secondary education can be removed in countries where many people are jobless, I still believe that the secondary education is very vital that it should be remained available for students.
I tried many attempts in IELTS and i kept falling due to the bad score in ielts writing. I got overall 7.5 in 4 times but i can't achieve 7.0 in writing. I hope this forum could help me improve my writing.
Can anyone evaluate my writing task 2 below. Thank you in advance.
Question: In countries where there is high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who will have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argued that we should only provide higher education to students in countries where people can easily find a job after graduation. However, in my opinion, I totally disagree with this statement because of the important role of secondary education to our society which will be discussed below.
The first reason is that further education are unreplaceable in providing quality labor resources in all countries. Disregarding the unemployment rate, every year, there are demands in the job market for high skills workers who were trained in universities. If secondary education were closed, no one could become doctors, lawyers, financial analyst or scientists. As a results, the economy and society of those countries will be decreased. For example, in 2017, many universities in Turkey were closed and led to the chaos among Turkish society when a large proportion of intelligent students in Turkey went abroad to continue their education.
Secondly, I believe that higher education is a key to foster a country economy and at the same time, solve the problem of unemployment. In many countries, when the education system was very poor and people could not go to school, the country economy only could depend on its agriculture and several mining industries. However, thanks to the advance of education, many new business operations are established, help the economy grow and attract many job in new sectors like IT. In addition, tertiary education itself is a major service industry which create many jobs such as university faculties and staffs. Therefore, it is very important to maintain secondary education beside primary education.
In conclusion, although it is debated that secondary education can be removed in countries where many people are jobless, I still believe that the secondary education is very vital that it should be remained available for students.
You started of with Nowdays, youngsters are already abandoning rural areas. Which implies its already happening but you entire essay after that was it would/could/should result in that...
Red are mistakes... read the essay with green sentences and see the areas where you need to improve including, when you develop an idea give it a proper closure.
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Why you are not getting 7, Ideas are not concrete you gave 2 ideas which were kind of interlinked to each other and yet not addressing the topic.
Vocabulary and Grammar also needs improvement.
Practice buddy.... read more essays please.
Hi velocityblood, Could not figure out your name
I did not write on 23 may due to less preparation but booked the 1 June slot and was working on writing mostly.
I was planning to put one letter and essay to be checked here may today or tomorrow to see if I can get 7. I have majorly working on TR and rest you please should tell me how much I have improved.
Thanks for checking on me and yes will keep you all posted about my exam. Wish me luck....)
Regards
Hope you will take care of grammar specifically articles.Hi velocityblood, Could not figure out your name
I did not write on 23 may due to less preparation but booked the 1 June slot and was working on writing mostly.
I was planning to put one letter and essay to be checked here may today or tomorrow to see if I can get 7. I have majorly working on TR and rest you please should tell me how much I have improved.
Thanks for checking on me and yes will keep you all posted about my exam. Wish me luck....)
Regards
Have tried my best to handle it - but old bad habits die hard
cannot be 100% sure