Guys, I'll be willing to share my Statement of Purpose together with an annotated version of it in which I've put down the details for why I wrote certain things down and how to write those sections. E-mail me at evolvingfaith (at) gmail (dot) com.
My one condition is that you do not share these documents with anybody else and in particular that you never upload them and make them available on the Internet.
I will probably reveal all the details of my application once I (Inshallah) have the Study Permit, but I'm not willing to do it before that.