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Cover letter - appropriate words

jkjk11

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Jul 17, 2015
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Hi all,

I have only one family member, my father. Don't have any siblings. So if I get TRV, my father would be alone for couple of weeks.

I was suggested by an agent that I should put "while I am away, maids will be taking care of my father" in cover letter since my father would be alone for a while.

Do you think putting "maids" word is okay in cover letter? I mean I don't want to sound rude or inappropriate to CIC. Just wondering that using such a word can hurt my cover letter or not.

Please let me know your thoughts on this. Thanks for your time in advance.
 

Bryanna

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Sep 8, 2014
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Hi,

Perhaps, you could say that you will have a close relative to stay with your dad - temporarily - while you are visiting Canada. In addition to this, your dad has close friends and neighbors who live nearby who will check on him every day


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