Applying for Study Permit with previous rejection

[riaz137]

Hi Everyone,

I had applied for the Bachelors of Computer Science program in Seneca College, and recently got the offer. I have accepted the offer, and now want to apply for the study permit.

Previously, I had applied for the study permit with offer from TDSB for Adult learning program. That program is basically gives you option to study and earn credits for Ontario Secondary Diploma.
Pathway to Advance Diploma or Degree programs in college and universities. But permit application was rejected, with below reasons .

I have reviewed the application. I have considered the following factors in my decision:
The purpose of the applicant's visit to Canada is not consistent with a temporary stay given the details provided in the application.
I further note that PA has provided limited information onto indicate why she would undertake secondary school in Canada instead of country of residence, where similar programs are available for a fraction of the cost. I am not satisfied the PA is a genuine student who would leave Canada at the end of authorized stay. For the reasons above, I have refused this application.

Now, I want to mention my previous rejection in letter of explanation to explain that now I have a better offer with post secondary program.

Can someone please guide me how to make my say here.

Thanks.

My previous application details:

Offer from TDSB Adult Learning Program, with grade 10th as education with no IELST. Paid half year fee and showed my sister and brother-in law funds with promise letter.

Current Application Details:

Offer from Seneca College Bachelors of CS program, with 12 grade as education and IELTS 6.5. Proof of funds from Sister and Brother-in Law with promise letter.

 

[Naturgrl]

Nothing to say, you just have to mention the refusal. Don't need to provide details. Sister's funds may not be considered so if refused for lack of funds then that is the reason. How much cash in personal accounts are they showing to support not only themselves but you. What is a promise letter?

 

[studentapplyins00on]

Nothing to say, you just have to mention the refusal. Don't need to provide details. Sister's funds may not be considered so if refused for lack of funds then that is the reason. How much cash in personal accounts are they showing to support not only themselves but you. What is a promise letter?

he/she means affidavit of support

 

[Naturgrl]

he/she means affidavit of support

Means nothing really.

 

[riaz137]

Nothing to say, you just have to mention the refusal. Don't need to provide details. Sister's funds may not be considered so if refused for lack of funds then that is the reason. How much cash in personal accounts are they showing to support not only themselves but you. What is a promise letter?

Alright, so I will just mention details for my previous application. I do not see any comments in my GCMS notes about my funds are being the reason for rejection. Let me know if we can observe anything in GCMS notes regarding the funds.

Please note that the letter from the sponsor is an acceptable document:

What we accept as proof​

You can prove your funds with at least one of the following:

• proof of a Canadian bank account in your name, if you’ve transferred money to Canada
• a Guaranteed Investment Certificate (GIC) from a participating Canadian financial institution
• proof of a student or education loan from a bank
• your bank statements for the past 4 months
• a bank draft that can be converted to Canadian dollars
• proof you paid tuition and housing fees
• a letter from the person or school giving you money, or
• proof of funding paid from within Canada, if you have a scholarship or are in a Canadian-funded educational program

 

[Naturgrl]

Alright, so I will just mention details for my previous application. I do not see any comments in my GCMS notes about my funds are being the reason for rejection. Let me know if we can observe anything in GCMS notes regarding the funds.

Please note that the letter from the sponsor is an acceptable document:

What we accept as proof​

You can prove your funds with at least one of the following:

• proof of a Canadian bank account in your name, if you’ve transferred money to Canada
• a Guaranteed Investment Certificate (GIC) from a participating Canadian financial institution
• proof of a student or education loan from a bank
• your bank statements for the past 4 months
• a bank draft that can be converted to Canadian dollars
• proof you paid tuition and housing fees
• a letter from the person or school giving you money, or
• proof of funding paid from within Canada, if you have a scholarship or are in a Canadian-funded educational program

Right but IRCC may not consider it because not your parent. You will know if approved. Make sure your sister shows not only the $21k in cash but in addition considerable funds for her, spouse and any children. If more than one year, then IRCC may wonder how you will afford the program.

 

[riaz137]

Right but IRCC may not consider it because not your parent. You will know if approved. Make sure your sister shows not only the $21k in cash but in addition considerable funds for her, spouse and any children. If more than one year, then IRCC may wonder how you will afford the program.

Yes, sure. She has more than CAD 50K in cash and also attaching NOA which shows more than CAD 100k annual earnings.

 

[Naturgrl]

Yes, sure. She has more than CAD 50K in cash and also attaching NOA which shows more than CAD 100k annual earnings.

Good luck.