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Mohsain

Star Member
May 16, 2011
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scylla said:
Being refused due to travel history means that you are being refused because you have never traveled outside of your country before (or traveled very little) and it doesn't make sense to the officer why you all of a sudden want to travel all the way to Canada.

Being refused due to purpose of visit likely means the officer believes you want to remain long term and have low ties to your home country.

My dear aprox 80% international student didnt ever travel before,and a student do not need any travel histroy..

purpose of visit is so clear ..ties in my home country is very strong i am only son of my parents,i have my own assets in my country.
which kind of ties VO want.....
 

asimabbas

Star Member
Aug 24, 2011
79
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Mohsin, Have a look the following SOP, She got her visa in few days with this sop. You make it accord with you profile.



See her SOP

ACADEMIC BACKGROUND AND PURPOSE OF STUDY

I have a degree in Law from one of the top universities of India and working in the capacity of Corporate and Commercial Lawyer in a Law Firm. Being from a business class family, I have always been intrigued towards the legal procedure involved in business as I have seen my family consulting lawyers for business issues.

Corporate Lawyers are hired to handle all legal aspects of business starting from commercial transactions to corporate mergers, Incorporation, acquisitions, amalgamations, due diligence etc. Due to Globalisation, Corporate Lawyers also have a duty to keep their clients up to date on business laws and regulations on international levels like Foreign Collaborations & Joint Ventures, takeovers, foreign direct Investments, Import - Export related matters etc.

While working in this field, I realized that the current level of knowledge and experience is not sufficient to reach to higher levels and build a successful career. I feel that I am not equipped with the business and managerial tools that are fundamental to evolve in this competitive corporate world. Many huge companies these days in India are opting to recruit lawyers with business management skills keeping in mind all the advantages involved in hiring them. The company gets an added advantage as they end up hiring a person who can multitask well. In addition, as India being a booming economy and now as we have international clientele, hence to serve them better, multinationals demand corporate lawyers who understand business and legal concepts from an international perspective.

The International Business Management which I intend to do cover a range of topics related to the business management skills and legal issues. I would be exposed to the processes involved in Strategic Management, International Finance, International Management, Global Marketplace, Global Entrepreneurship and Global Growth Strategies. Further, the most important being the Legal Considerations in International Trade which would introduce me to the real-world examples of ethical and legal considerations in various cultural and business settings.
The topics involved will help me in my personal growth as well. I will be able to master skills such as analytical and strategic thinking to avoid crisis situation, problem solving and decision making, planning, organising, self management, time management, team management etc.

Taking up business management and that too on International level is something which is quite lucrative for me and the employer. I will get a wonderful chance to lay a very strong foundation for my career with focus on diversity and multicultural concerns and gaining knowledge in traditional business topics with global mindset. And coming to the employer, it would be beneficial to hire a competent person who can develop more “commercial “solutions to the problems and manage his business considering all the legal aspects. I am sure that having this diploma would ensure better employment opportunities and a successful career back at home.


WHY CANADA

I short-listed two colleges, one in Canada and other in Australia. After consulting with my peers and seniors and checking course contents thoroughly, I am convinced that Canada is a better option as it has developed a first-rate education system with high standards and global recognition.

Canadian culture is more diverse and vibrant. It is considered peaceful, safe and orderly country. Being a country of immigrants from all over the World, different perspectives are respected and learning together is encouraged.

Tuition fees and living expenses are also in favour of Canada when compared to other countries with equally good education system.

WHY GEORGIAN COLLEGE

I have come to learn that the Georgian College is one of largest, most diversified and highly respected colleges in Canada. Georgian results on the KPI Surveys exceeded the provincial college average especially in student satisfaction in terms of quality of services, programming and resources. The facilities offered by the College will help me gain experience be it social, recreational or my personal development. This program brings together participants from all over the world, so I would be in contact with diverse cultures and I would also develop an international network. It would be very rewarding to share and exchange thoughts and ideas with a group of people who are from different nationalities, cultural orientations and schools of thought on one platform.
Another factor making the International Business Management program from Georgian College like no other is its length and time span of 12 Months. Mostly people like me who have had an experience in the job world want to upgrade their skills in a specific specialization, which is available as short term diploma courses. My motive is not to get job after that but to gain valuable skills in my profession which will help me to move in the higher levels. Besides, once in the workforce, I really can't afford to be jobless for years and so doing a short term diploma seems a much viable choice. After being a part of Georgian college I am sure, I would grow into an enterprising and an outstanding graduate.



To sum it up, I would like to state that having quality education and ample exposure in the legal field has built a solid foundation of the law sector specific knowledge and skills, however, now I wish to complement all this with focused and structured study of business management to launch a successful managerial career on a global level. Business knowledge combined with all the necessary skills is vital to appreciate my net worth as a thorough professional.












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Mohsain

Star Member
May 16, 2011
67
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asimabbas said:
Mohsin, Have a look the following SOP, She got her visa in few days with this sop. You make it accord with you profile.



See her SOP

ACADEMIC BACKGROUND AND PURPOSE OF STUDY

I have a degree in Law from one of the top universities of India and working in the capacity of Corporate and Commercial Lawyer in a Law Firm. Being from a business class family, I have always been intrigued towards the legal procedure involved in business as I have seen my family consulting lawyers for business issues.

Corporate Lawyers are hired to handle all legal aspects of business starting from commercial transactions to corporate mergers, Incorporation, acquisitions, amalgamations, due diligence etc. Due to Globalisation, Corporate Lawyers also have a duty to keep their clients up to date on business laws and regulations on international levels like Foreign Collaborations & Joint Ventures, takeovers, foreign direct Investments, Import - Export related matters etc.

While working in this field, I realized that the current level of knowledge and experience is not sufficient to reach to higher levels and build a successful career. I feel that I am not equipped with the business and managerial tools that are fundamental to evolve in this competitive corporate world. Many huge companies these days in India are opting to recruit lawyers with business management skills keeping in mind all the advantages involved in hiring them. The company gets an added advantage as they end up hiring a person who can multitask well. In addition, as India being a booming economy and now as we have international clientele, hence to serve them better, multinationals demand corporate lawyers who understand business and legal concepts from an international perspective.

The International Business Management which I intend to do cover a range of topics related to the business management skills and legal issues. I would be exposed to the processes involved in Strategic Management, International Finance, International Management, Global Marketplace, Global Entrepreneurship and Global Growth Strategies. Further, the most important being the Legal Considerations in International Trade which would introduce me to the real-world examples of ethical and legal considerations in various cultural and business settings.
The topics involved will help me in my personal growth as well. I will be able to master skills such as analytical and strategic thinking to avoid crisis situation, problem solving and decision making, planning, organising, self management, time management, team management etc.

Taking up business management and that too on International level is something which is quite lucrative for me and the employer. I will get a wonderful chance to lay a very strong foundation for my career with focus on diversity and multicultural concerns and gaining knowledge in traditional business topics with global mindset. And coming to the employer, it would be beneficial to hire a competent person who can develop more “commercial “solutions to the problems and manage his business considering all the legal aspects. I am sure that having this diploma would ensure better employment opportunities and a successful career back at home.


WHY CANADA

I short-listed two colleges, one in Canada and other in Australia. After consulting with my peers and seniors and checking course contents thoroughly, I am convinced that Canada is a better option as it has developed a first-rate education system with high standards and global recognition.

Canadian culture is more diverse and vibrant. It is considered peaceful, safe and orderly country. Being a country of immigrants from all over the World, different perspectives are respected and learning together is encouraged.

Tuition fees and living expenses are also in favour of Canada when compared to other countries with equally good education system.

WHY GEORGIAN COLLEGE

I have come to learn that the Georgian College is one of largest, most diversified and highly respected colleges in Canada. Georgian results on the KPI Surveys exceeded the provincial college average especially in student satisfaction in terms of quality of services, programming and resources. The facilities offered by the College will help me gain experience be it social, recreational or my personal development. This program brings together participants from all over the world, so I would be in contact with diverse cultures and I would also develop an international network. It would be very rewarding to share and exchange thoughts and ideas with a group of people who are from different nationalities, cultural orientations and schools of thought on one platform.
Another factor making the International Business Management program from Georgian College like no other is its length and time span of 12 Months. Mostly people like me who have had an experience in the job world want to upgrade their skills in a specific specialization, which is available as short term diploma courses. My motive is not to get job after that but to gain valuable skills in my profession which will help me to move in the higher levels. Besides, once in the workforce, I really can't afford to be jobless for years and so doing a short term diploma seems a much viable choice. After being a part of Georgian college I am sure, I would grow into an enterprising and an outstanding graduate.



To sum it up, I would like to state that having quality education and ample exposure in the legal field has built a solid foundation of the law sector specific knowledge and skills, however, now I wish to complement all this with focused and structured study of business management to launch a successful managerial career on a global level. Business knowledge combined with all the necessary skills is vital to appreciate my net worth as a thorough professional.





thanku My dear :)






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romannsd

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Oct 24, 2012
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i am rejected today
reason:
1.I am not satisfied that you have sufficient and available financial resources, without working in Canada, to maintain yourself during your proposed period of study.
2. You have not satisfied me that you would leave Canada at the end of your stay. In reaching this decision I considered several factors,
Your travel history
purpose of visit
your personal assets and financial status


i showed $30000 cad in my mothers account also showed my assets $650000 cad. can anybody tell me how much money needed for the study permit? i will apply again....plz suggest me how can I apply?
 

Rabia7557

Star Member
Oct 19, 2012
76
1
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
My name is Rabia Ali. And I wan to study the course ACBU at Cambrian College of Applied Arts & Technology Canada. In today’s world of survival of the fittest and competition, one has to equip knowledge and experience, and should be ambitious. It has been my wish to pursue my studies at a leading college in Canada. Knowledge is considered as the greatest wealth a man can posses in his life that can be acquired through hard work. The reason why I am going to study Business Administration & Accounting is to pursue a career that would help me understanding the market and acquire wealth. I would like to study in Canada and thus I will obtain a Diploma in business studies. As these courses of Business Administration & Accounting are available in Pakistan also but why I have chosen to study in Canada is quite clear from the point that Canadian education is worldwide recognized and the faculty is highly trained, qualified & experienced in Canadian educational institutes as are not found else where in the world. After the course I wish to own a lucrative business where I can provide good service, good products and create job opportunities for others in my country, and in Pakistan I will thus have a better chance to meet the Business Industry challenges and I will be warmly welcomed by the Business community in a way of great prestige. In order to achieve all these I may have to work for a few years in a private sector to gain experience. Hence, to achieve my ultimate goal I would have to start working in a company where I can learn the concepts, the methods and the secrets of business administration. Moreover I have strong ties back in my country as I am the member of a good family in Pakistan. I have my ambition to get education from Canada and return to my homeland to serve my country and family too. My father lives & works in Qatar and I have to take care of my family after my father so I want to come back to my country with a great achievement from Canada that will help me to make my career prosperous which is the basic human right also.

After my Higher Secondary school education I want to study Business Administration major in Accounting as I have strong inclination towards this field. Business studies are the fastest road between where we are now and where we want to go in this competitive environment. Moreover, if we look around we see how our current world is so commercialized which manifests the power of commerce, economics and business. However, the income generated by employees of business can put them in a high standard of living that no other job can generate which makes me proud to major in Accounting. Moreover I personally have a good marketing and convincing attitude to which I want to give a definite shape through business education. My ambition is to learn new business concepts. Especially in the field of Business Administration & Accounting due to the dynamism displayed by the world of business and the horizons they cover. I would like to broaden my scope of work and develop better critical thinking and sharpen strategic and tactical skills with appropriate leadership skills.



The course ,ACBU, gives Practical knowledge and analytical thinking and quick understanding ability. Why am I studying in Canada? Though it’s expensive to study Business Administration in Canada, I feel that it’s impossible to compare the exposure and the wide area of knowledge which one can experience by studying Business Administration & Accounting in Canada. An exposure to the International market, excellent interpersonal skills and the chances to improve the ability to become a powerful manager is what I’m going to seek by studying in Canada. I have noticed that studying in Canada gives a great opportunity to study business education in one of the most advanced countries in the world in terms of being a financial world class and business centers. I really feel studying Business Administration abroad is a gift of my life in the educational career since it’s my long term ambition. Hence, I am interested more than anything to do this course of ACBU in the good college like Cambrian College and improve my managing skills and improvise my abilities on the same and become a powerful leader in the near future.

I worked with ELMEC International as an Accounts Officer with effect from 25/04/2011 to 28/10/2012.
I got the confident in handling the accounts in a good manner as I started understanding the accounts, and I was able to take accounts matters fairly and improved in this skill. Team meetings, Huddles, Promotional schemes and lot more gave me an opportunity to prove my accounts handling skills and the ability to organize the venue and submit report on the same. I was a consistent performer a. It provided me a greater opportunity to survive in the organization till the end of the process by October 2012.

Most of the time , I had the opportunity to handle and monitor all the accounts of the organization as I was the senior as well as the top performer in the office. I normally provide process knowledge & training to newly joined employees in our company. Daily at the end of the day I use to generate the report of the entire day and make all the ledgers in a well manner that includes the complete data base of each and every transaction of the day and send it to my Manager. He was very supportive as he discussed more about managerial skills and accounts handling tricks and helped me a lot to taking the accounts in a great way. His Accounts handling skill made me admire him to learn more from him and he trained me a lot on administration as he knows that I was planning for Business Administration & Accounting Course.
Thank you for giving me a chance to express myself and please consider me for studying Business Administration & Accounting in Canada at Cambrian College of Applied Arts & Technology.



This is my SOP....give your suggestion
 

waqas174

Full Member
Dec 1, 2012
27
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Category........
Visa Office......
CHC Islamabad
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
19-11-2012
it is well written but main problem is sequence.
 

waqas174

Full Member
Dec 1, 2012
27
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Category........
Visa Office......
CHC Islamabad
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
19-11-2012
1st write about urself, academic background then y choose this course and in final why Canada..its my own opinion based on what it seems to me logical.however anyone can disagree.
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