Thanks for taking the time to read my post and I would really appreciate any confirmation/advice from you. 
I am working as a System Analyst and am planning to apply under NOC 2171 sometime next week. Could you please help me by reviewing my letter?
Also, my letter says I am working "fulltime" - is that good enough or should it explicitly say I worked 40 hours a week?
My company letterhead does not have any email address but has the company address, telephone, fax and website address. Is that okay?
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Friday November 21, 2014
To whom it may concern:
This letter is to confirm that XXXX has been employed with XXXX since November 7, 2013. She is currently working fulltime as a Junior Systems Analyst, and earning an annual salary of $XXX CAD. She is also participating in the company group benefits plan which includes extended health and dental benefits.
XXX's duties included:
- Analyzing Payment systems applications used for online transaction processing
- Assisting in design requirements for Payment applications
- Providing technical assistance in the determination and solution of issues related to Payment systems and applications
- Monitoring Payment systems, day to day payment processing tasks and operations; performs root cause analysis of any reported problems
- Provides inputs and alternatives to Payment services team for any system changes
- Reviews and provides feedback on Business requirement documents for Payment systems
- Develops and implements scripts and macros to automate and improvise efficiency of Payment services operations
- Prepares and maintains system diagrams for Payment services systems and applications
- Implements Quality Assurance procedures and methodologies for Payment systems and applications
- Assists in Disaster Recovery processes for Payment systems and services
- Documents and maintains internal service level agreements (SLA) for Payment systems.
If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Thank you,
HR
I am working as a System Analyst and am planning to apply under NOC 2171 sometime next week. Could you please help me by reviewing my letter?
Also, my letter says I am working "fulltime" - is that good enough or should it explicitly say I worked 40 hours a week?
My company letterhead does not have any email address but has the company address, telephone, fax and website address. Is that okay?
***********************
Friday November 21, 2014
To whom it may concern:
This letter is to confirm that XXXX has been employed with XXXX since November 7, 2013. She is currently working fulltime as a Junior Systems Analyst, and earning an annual salary of $XXX CAD. She is also participating in the company group benefits plan which includes extended health and dental benefits.
XXX's duties included:
- Analyzing Payment systems applications used for online transaction processing
- Assisting in design requirements for Payment applications
- Providing technical assistance in the determination and solution of issues related to Payment systems and applications
- Monitoring Payment systems, day to day payment processing tasks and operations; performs root cause analysis of any reported problems
- Provides inputs and alternatives to Payment services team for any system changes
- Reviews and provides feedback on Business requirement documents for Payment systems
- Develops and implements scripts and macros to automate and improvise efficiency of Payment services operations
- Prepares and maintains system diagrams for Payment services systems and applications
- Implements Quality Assurance procedures and methodologies for Payment systems and applications
- Assists in Disaster Recovery processes for Payment systems and services
- Documents and maintains internal service level agreements (SLA) for Payment systems.
If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Thank you,
HR
