Need help for Offer of Employement/Letter of Employement

[sahilarora2003]

Hi everyone.

I hope everyone is doing well!

I just need your opinions. Just finished drafting my both letters and about to submit tomorrow but before doing that, i just need your opinion if that would suffice the requirement as per IRCC.

https://ibb.co/Y33yWPc
https://ibb.co/phcZsqf
https://ibb.co/bHpsjTQ
https://ibb.co/5sJW7gG

Thank you in advance.