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winnycanada said:
Dear Dr. Hasib,
Hey. We are not here to argue lol... i was just asking which parts become more diff. as some others here mentioned... 9 is always possible for reading and listening since they are objective sections... am i right?
Yes, ofcourse.
But not possible in writing.
& if u ask someone why he/she didn't get 9 in writing, he/she might think that you know nothing about IELTS....lol

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Yes, ofcourse.
But not possible in writing.
& if u ask someone why he/she didn't get 9 in writing, he/she might think that you know nothing about IELTS....lol

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nothing about IELTS is too exaggerating... lol but writing for 9 is still possible! lets aim for the best!

by the way, i used computer to practice writing the other day, and I wrote 510 words in 41 minutes for the 2nd task...
 

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nothing about IELTS is too exaggerating... lol but writing for 9 is still possible! lets aim for the best!

by the way, i used computer to practice writing the other day, and I wrote 510 words in 41 minutes for the 2nd task...
frankly speaking, i don't think you will get 8.5 in writing module, forget about 9 :p
You will not be given a laptop during exam so try to practice writing with pen & paper....

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frankly speaking, i don't think you will get 8.5 in writing module, forget about 9 :p
You will not be given a laptop during exam so try to practice writing with pen & paper....

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what u think the reasons are for them not to give 8.5 even?
 

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what u think the reasons are for them not to give 8.5 even?
Reasons are very simple,Don't you get it? How come an examiner give you 8.5 when you are not apt for it!! ;D ;D ;D


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Dr.Hasib said:
Reasons are very simple,Don't you get it? How come an examiner give you 8.5 when you are not apt for it!! ;D ;D ;D


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Salam Dr.Hasib,

Kindly send me the IELTS book for good writing.my email ishfaq2003@yahoo.com

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hey guys!!

does CNO really accepts GENERAL training for ielts?

which is easier?general or academic?

can anyone teach me on general writing task 1 please? just give me different samples
and summaries about it..thank u thank u :)
 

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Writing task# 1:

Rules of letter writing:

1 The Opening Greeting of the Letter
Your letter will probably need to be a reasonably informal letter to a friend or a semi-formal letter. The opening of your letter should reflect which one you are writing.
A friendly letter will open with Dear followed by a name which should then be followed by a comma, eg:
Dear John,
A semi-formal letter will also open with Dear and then be followed by a name, (if you decide that in the situation you would know the name) or by Sir (if it's a man), Madam (if it's a woman) or Sir/Madam if you don't know, eg:
Dear Mr. Phillips,
Dear Mrs. Phillips,
Dear Sir,
Dear Madam,
Dear Sir/Madam,
The question also might specify how you are to begin so follow what it says.
2 The Opening Paragraph of the Letter
In a semi-formal letter, I feel it is important to state the reason for the letter straight away. You could use the following to help you:
I am writing to ask/ tell//inform you that...
I am writing to ask/inquire...
I am writing with regard to...
I am writing with reference to...
I am writing in connection with...
I am writing in response to...
In reply to your letter, I am writing to... (if the question indicates that you
have had a letter)
If the letter is a less formal one to a friend then you should open the letter in a friendlier way. EG:
Dear John,
Hi there! It's been so long since I've heard from you. I hope you are doing well and I hope all you family are doing fine. I'm pretty good in spite of working hard. Anyway, the reason I'm writing is...
3 The Substance of the Letter
I've already gone into detail about answering the question fully and using your imagination to produce a realistic letter fulfilling all functions so I won't repeat that. Through great experience with IELTS, I can say that questions tend to ask you to do certain things. Here I will give you some ideas about some language to use in the substance of the letter which will help you to answer the task well.
Asking for Help
I would like you to...
I would be grateful if you could...
I need to ask your advice about...
I'd like to ask for information about...
What I'm looking for is...
Complaining
I'm writing to express my dissatisfaction/annoyance/ about...
I'm writing to express my anger at...
I am not happy about...
... is not what I expected/was expecting.
I want to know what you are going to do about this situation.
NB When complaining, don't get too angry. I've had students who really became too heated in their complaints. In a polite semi-formal letter, this should not happen. Also, do not over-exaggerate. If it's a reasonably small and understandable problem, do say that you're not satisfied but show that you understand and stay calm in your expressions.
Thanking

I'm very grateful for...
I'd like to thank you very much for...
I very much appreciated...
Apologizing
I'm very sorry that/about...
Please forgive me for...
I'd like to apologize about...
Please accept my apologies
4 Ending your Letter
First of all, in English we often end letters before the sign off with certain phrases. These can be included in most letters and will make your letter seem realistic and polished. For a formal letter, you could use:
If you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thanking you in advance for your help, I look forward to hearing from you soon.
For a more informal letter you could use:
If you need to know anything else, just get in touch with me as soon as you can. Thanks a lot for your help and I hope to hear from you soon.
Be careful though! IELTS examiners quite rightly look for writing that has been memorised and just repeated so, if you use expressions like the ones above, make sure that they fit in with the rest of your letter.
Finally you'll need to sign off your letter. For a formal letter use:
Yours faithfully, OR
Yours sincerely,
Remember the commas (it makes a good impression on the examiner if you use good punctuation) and spell "sincerely" correctly (a lot of people don't!).
For an informal letter, love is not always appropriate though English speakers use it a lot. Better would be to use:
Regards,
Yours,
Best wishes,
Other Hints for the IELTS General Training Task 1 Writing

DON'T copy any part of the question in your answer. This is not your own work and therefore will be disregarded by the examiner and deducted from the word count. You can use individual words but be careful of using "chunks" of the question text.
Don't repeat yourself or the same ideas. This gives a bad impression and the examiner realises that it isn't adding to the content of your letter.
If you are weak at English grammar, try to use short sentences. This allows you to control the grammar and the meaning of your writing much more easily and contributes to a better cohesion and coherence mark. It's much easier to make things clear in a foreign language if you keep your sentences short!
Think about the tenses of your verbs. If you're writing about something that happened in the past, your verbs will need to be in the past tenses. If you're arranging something in the future, you will need to use the future tenses. If it's a habitual action, you'll need the present simple tense and so on. If you have time, a quick check of your verbs at the end of the exam can help you find errors.
As I just said, if you have finished the exam with time to spare, DON'T just sit there!! Check what you have done. If you have time after the check, check again. And so on....
Don't be irrelevant. Although you can use your imagination to expand on your answer, if any part of your letter is totally unrelated to the question and put in to just put up the word count, then the examiner will not take it into account and deduct it from the word count.
If you want to improve, there's no secret. Practice. Practice. Practice. You won't get better sitting and doing nothing. Even good English users need practice for the IELTS exam. It could make all the difference between your getting the band that you need, and getting half a band less than you need and having to wait 3 months to do the exam again.
Finally, there are no correct answers or methods. Here I've given you some ideas to guide you and hopefully to help you but the questions can be answered well in different ways. Good luck!
 

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Sample1. Writing task 1 (a letter): Complaint letter:
Write a letter to a restaurant manager complaining about the food and the service during your recent visit,
when you dined in with your family on a special occasion. In your letter:
- Describe the problems that you had,
- Say what were the consequences of these problems,
- Specify an action you would like the manager to take


Dear Sir/Madam,
I am one of your customers bearing the customer number: 546. I am writing this letter to complain about the food and the service during my anniversary that was held in your restaurant on November, 16th.
As you know, last week, I reserved the restaurant for my 8th anniversary and I invited about 50 persons. Unfortunately, not only the quality of the food was poor but also the service of the staff was unsatisfactory. The numbers of waiter and waitress were not sufficient for serving food and we had to wait a long time to get the service. In addition, some dishes (food) were stale & 3 persons of my relatives got sick from that stale & unhygienic food, immediately after returning home. These circumstances had caused enough troubles for me.
Bearing the above circumstances in mind, I would be grateful if you refund 50% of my payment. In addition, I would like to opine that being a restaurant manager; you should be more cautious about the service and quality of food your restaurant is providing to customers.
I am looking forward to receiving appropriate response from you.
Faithfully yours,

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Sample2. Writing Task 1 (a letter): personal letter+ ask for apology
You were looking after your friend's house while he was out of the country. Accidentally, you broke
something in the house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Apolozise & describe what happened ,
- describe the damage,
- explain how you are planning to compensate your friend.


Dear Roger,
I hope you have a safe journey and all things are going well for you. I am writing this letter to express my apology for the incident that occurred by me accidentally.
The last day before your coming back, when was working with your computer, I installed the Office 2003 in your PC. After installation the program, when I was ejecting DVD from the DVD-ROM, I accidentally broke the DVD that contained a software collection. I know you use that frequently for your job. So, I have bought a new software collection same as yours.
I would be grateful if you could give me your address so that I can send the DVD to you via any express courier services. Otherwise, you can buy a new DVD and inform me the price. I am able to send you the cost of DVD either by credit card or by cheque.
Once again please accept my apology for the inconvenience. I would be grateful if you kindly consider my proposal for compensation. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,

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Sample3. Writing Task 1 (a letter): job application letter:
You read a job advertisement for the Children's Care association. They need volunteers (to work without
pay). Write a letter to the organization and say
- why you think you fit that job,
- what interests you in this job,
- how soon you are available to join


Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a manager of the P.S.P Nursery Center. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am apt for the position “Child care coordinator” that you advertised on your website.
As a nursery manager, I have more than 10 years experience in working with children. Not only I have got four international certificates related to Children's Care, but also I am qualified as a supervisor in tree Children Health Institution. Since I am financially solvent, I do not need any salary for my service. In addition, I had a fascination to work with a charity organization.
I would be grateful if you could set up an appointment for an interview. By the way, I am ready to attend my job in the first week of December. For your convenience, I would like to add my contact address:
Name: Mr. X****
Address: Tehran...
Contact number: +9891831366
Please find attached my detailed resume, educational certificates, employer reference letters etc.
Once again, please kindly consider my application. I am looking forward to receiving your response.
Faithfully yours,
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Sample4. Writing task 1 (a letter):
You are a college student in an English speaking country. Write a letter containing your intention to move to college accommodation

Dear Sir / Madam,
I am a student of your college transported in Chemical engineering last term. I am writing this letter to request a college accommodation as soon as possible since I have some problems with my current accommodation.
As you know, at the enrollment of new semester, I chose private accommodation and then I rent a suite in city center. After two weeks, I realized that there is not suitable for me and the distance between suite and college is too long. In spite of the fact that I wake up early morning, most of the time I cannot attend at class on time. In addition, there is not any public transportation and most of the time the minibus stops are very crowded and I must to wait more than half of an hour. In addition, due to daily transportation, my expense has been arisen significantly compared to the last term.
I would be grateful if you get me a room from college accommodation and thus resolve my problem. The college accommodation is nearby campus and I believe that not only is more economically but also its atmosphere is quiet and serene for studying. Moreover, I can access to internet and resources in the library.
I am looking forward to receiving you assistance. Thank you in advance.

Yours faithfully,
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Hi all & seniors,
two of my friends claimed that they have applied mar10,2010 & starting of 2010 in REG NURSE CATEGORY, and never submitted IELTS results.Now they got PR and leaving for Canada on this May.Is it true?
Can anyone remember when THE system was started with IELTS submiSSION within 120 days?
If ur education was all in english,can we submit a letter for proficient in language by which u will be escaped from IELTS?when it was started and later demolished?
Is there any truth in their statements?they all processed with help of agency.
WHEN IS THE SYSTEM STARTED WITH A REQUIREMENT OF 120 DAYS DEADLINE FOR IELTS RESULTS AND OTHER DOCUMENTS SUBMISSION?ANYone can remember?
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Hi Dr Hasib,
can you tell me when did the CIO started the system with IELTS SUBMISSION within 120days?during that time we can escape the exam by submitting documents claiming that our education in english.we know that ielts is compulsory now even for british after 26/6/2010.
can you tell me the timing of starting the system with IELTS WITHIN 120 DAYS TO VO office.Because two of my freinds claimed they never wrote ielts when they applied in Mar & april2010.they got pr now.they used agency.
pls help me.
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