What is the best way to write sop

[harshdeep_057]

Hi can someone help me with sop my last refusal was due to purpose of my visa is not for temporary stay and Your proposed studies are not reasonable in light

 

[Naturgrl]

What did GCMS notes say.

So you explain why you must come to Canada to take this specific program, how you are expanding on current education (eg first Masters) and how the program will give you better job opportunities when you return, justify costs and explain how the program is so unique that it is not available anywhere and that the studies clearly show career and education progression.

You are coming to study not immigrate so you need to explain why coming to Canada is best for your career advancement. Hopefully it is a program that is not geared to international students and one of the many programs being cut like project/supply/project management. Those are programs where only international students attend and have no job opportunities here.

 

[harshdeep_057]

What did GCMS notes say.

So you explain why you must come to Canada to take this specific program, how you are expanding on current education (eg first Masters) and how the program will give you better job opportunities when you return, justify costs and explain how the program is so unique that it is not available anywhere and that the studies clearly show career and education progression.

You are coming to study not immigrate so you need to explain why coming to Canada is best for your career advancement. Hopefully it is a program that is not geared to international students and one of the many programs being cut like project/supply/project management. Those are programs where only international students attend and have no job opportunities here.

What supply chain have not jobs ? But I show online on website like linkedin that it is in high demand

 

[Naturgrl]

What supply chain have not jobs ? But I show online on website like linkedin that it is in high demand

So in your country? Then you need to highlight all the job offers you will have and higher pay when you return home.

This has nothing to do with jobs in Canada. So if you see 10 jobs in Canada just remember there are 1000s of people applying. Just because you think it is high demand doesn't mean anything.

You are coming to Canada to study so show that is why you must study the program in Canada and not elsewhere.

 

[harshdeep_057]

So in your country? Then you need to highlight all the job offers you will have and higher pay when you return home.

This has nothing to do with jobs in Canada. So if you see 10 jobs in Canada just remember there are 1000s of people applying. Just because you think it is high demand doesn't mean anything.

You are coming to Canada to study so show that is why you are coming to Canada.

My course is supply chain management it have really great demand in my country due to increase in e-commerce

 

[Naturgrl]

My course is supply chain management it have really great demand in my country due to increase in e-commerce

So you explain why the program is only available in Canada, and cannot be completed in home country or online. That is just one reason. The other is showing education advancement so if you have a degree should be a Masters. Or make sure the program is at a university and not a college.

Not sure why you need to come Canada for supply chain management as that is one of the programs that has been abused and only international students attend. It is on IRCC radar of poor programs. Make sure it is a university and not a certificate/diploma at a college. Even better a degree or masters. If Canadian education is important to you then go to Athabasca University. It is an online university and no need to come to Canada.

 

[harshdeep_057]

So you explain why the program is only available in Canada, and cannot be completed in home country or online. That is just one reason. The other is showing education advancement so if you have a degree should be a Masters. Or make sure the program is at a university and not a college.

Not sure why you need to come Canada for supply chain management as that is one of the programs that has been abused and only international students attend. It is on IRCC radar of poor programs. Make sure it is a university and not a certificate/diploma at a college. Even better a degree or masters. If Canadian education is important to you then go to Athabasca University. It is an online university and no need to come to Canada.

Thanks for the help sir i understand everything much better and I know what I should do