Suggest changes in Reapplication EVERYBODY

[dineshonnet]

Following post gives details of my Profile.

http://www.canadavisa.com/canada-immigration-discussion-board/what-to-do-nowspp-visa-refusal-for-september-2012-intake-t112152.0.html

previously refused due to reasons.

1) You have not satisfied me that you will leave Canada by the end of the stay in reacing this decision I considered sevral factors including : PURPOSE OF VISIT

2) OTHER REASONS- -NOT satisfied that you possess abilites to succeed in choosen program
Here are all the details,


Now reapplying for Jan 2013 in cenntenial college, in 1 year graduate certificate of International Buisness mangement.
Refused for GBM humber.

What changes should i do for reapplication??

property evaluation
and WHAT should i mention in SOP to prove than i am a genuine student??

please suggest me any changes i should do in my file according to you which could help me in getting VISA.
GO to the link given above see my profile.

 

[mead]

ur b com percentage is low ....is there a way u can prove u will work hard and get better grades in canada? Like if u have done any course after b com and if u have scored well in it etc. also family ties are important ..showing property is a very good way of family ties. wait for more replies

 

[billad]

2nd reason is because of your bcom grades as mead said. One way of justifying was suggested by Mead that you could show some achievements after that degree which is none in your case. My suggestion in that case would be to write a strong Letter stating why you got so low percentage if you have any genuine reason and also state that you will be able to complete the course with your hard work and dedication etc etc.

for family ties, yeah property is good but better reasons are:

1) Blood relations
2) Show job market survey to overcome the rejection reason that you do have good jobs after your study back in your home country.
3) Property, agriculture or commercial or home etc

just take it like this, you have to convince the VO that you are a genuine student. I am afraid you won't be able to get admission in university with these grades but if you can then that is going to be a huge plus point.

 

[dineshonnet]

2nd reason is because of your bcom grades as mead said. One way of justifying was suggested by Mead that you could show some achievements after that degree which is none in your case. My suggestion in that case would be to write a strong Letter stating why you got so low percentage if you have any genuine reason and also state that you will be able to complete the course with your hard work and dedication etc etc.

for family ties, yeah property is good but better reasons are:

1) Blood relations
2) Show job market survey to overcome the rejection reason that you do have good jobs after your study back in your home country.
3) Property, agriculture or commercial or home etc

just take it like this, you have to convince the VO that you are a genuine student. I am afraid you won't be able to get admission in university with these grades but if you can then that is going to be a huge plus point.

Billad, thankx for every suggestion and yes family ties can be proven somwhow.
but how can i justify my low %, i havent done anything after B.COM because i completed it this year only,
how can i justify my % can you give ideas, what to write in SOP

 

[dineshonnet]

Please do suggest me how to justify my low %

 

[peep]

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