I think the “setting up an NGO” furthered complicated your SOP. You say move to Canada first but then you state can’t set up the NGO because your need more experience on your return to a country you are not a citizen of. So the ECE program really doesn’t allow you to set up your NGO on your return, so the program is not relevant. Don’t say what the NGO is but if you are running it shouldn’t you be doing a business degree, MBA or post grade in business? Ties your parents have are not your ties. You can show government pension if you have it.
I see how that could've complicated matters. I have already mentioned the NGO, so I'm not sure they would believe me if I change it to "I want to set up a daycare" or something related. What should I do?

