Most of duties will be same as first letter, just add more duies instead of the ones copied from web site and chaging job title. Do u think this is still bad idea ?? and Im still working on same company.
Thank you guys.
This is what i sent to below
2. Position held:  Administrative Officer (NOC#1221), Full-time (37.5 hour/week) 
3. Job Description
•	Performed data entry duties into operational systems and performed inventory control on all activities related to warehouse operation, shipping
•	Reviewed scheduled shipment reports to determine what was due to ship and compared these reports with available inventory
•	Oversee and co-ordinate office administrative procedures and review, evaluate and implement new procedures-copy from website
•	Identified and resolved potential problems in order to avoid a negative scheduling impact -copy from website
•	Establish work priorities, delegate work to office support staff, and ensure deadlines are met and procedures are followed -copy from website
•	Assist in preparation of operating budget and budgetary controls-copy from website
•	Assemble data and prepare periodic and special reports, manuals and correspondence
•	Prepared shipping documents and inventory control and Managed to receive and capture the shipping documents in the computerized system.
•	Updated databases and statistics to be reported to the company's management.
•	Ensured appropriate computing of shipping information to track all shipments
This is what im going to send
2. Position held: Supervisors, supply chain, tracking and scheduling co-ordination occupations (NOC#1215), Full-time (37.5 hour/week) 
3. Job Description
•	Performed data entry duties into operational systems and performed inventory control on all activities related to warehouse operation, shipping, receiving, distributing and maintaining.
•	Reviewed scheduled shipment reports to determine what was due to ship and compared these reports with available inventory and resolve work-related issues.
•	Identified and resolved potential problems in order to avoid a negative scheduling impact. 
•	Establish work priorities, delegate work to office support staff, and ensure deadlines are met and procedures are followed
•	Prepared shipping documents and inventory control and Managed to receive and capture the shipping documents in the computerized system.
•	Updated databases and statistics to be reported to the company's management.
•	Ensured appropriate computing of shipping information to track all shipments
•	Prepared monthly report summarizing and analyzing inventory status
•	Developed  a practical business strategy based on customer/client feedback
•	Created and checked reports of products received and purchase order point