PLEASE PROOFREAD MY SOWP.

[maria61816]

please proofread my SOWP. tell me if its lacking something or i need to emphasize this aspect.. pls pls.. I recently got approved of SP and im planning to apply my husband for SOWP maybe early nextyear. Please proofread. thankyou!

 

[wonderbly]

I think it's too wordy, with too much unnecessary information. All the stories about how you met and hurdles you fought is not needed. Just list your qualifications and how your skills can be put to use in Canada (if relevant). My husband's SOWP was just a page long stating his qualifications, recent work achievements and how believes his skills will be beneficial to Canada's economy and his physical presence with his his family will be beneficial to us all.

 

[wonderbly]

And you can't keep using "last" to describe a date that is years ago.