last opportunity

[ihosam]

Hi mates,
I will send this letter to visa office on London, please check it and give me your advise.
thank you.





File number:
Full name:
Date of birth:
Mailing address:
E-mail address:
Telephone number:


Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter in order to inform you that I did not get the appropriate score for IELTS exam which it was on 25th of September.
I hope to give me the last opportunity to improve my score and extending processing time till 18th of December. So, I can reach to 67 points.
I am so sorry for that issue but the result was a shock for me and it is unexpected. I know this excuse is unacceptable and irrational but your help in this issue will be appreciate.
Please I need this opportunity. My family and I love Canada and we like to spend the remaining days of our lives there.

Thanks for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

 

[Mr.singh]

Hi mates,
I will send this letter to visa office on London, please check it and give me your advise.
thank you.

Bro just double check ur grammar before sending this letter...there are some little mistakes in letter which may give bad impression..

best wishes.......



File number:
Full name:
Date of birth:
Mailing address:
E-mail address:
Telephone number:


Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter in order to inform you that I did not get the appropriate score for IELTS exam which it was on 25th of September.
I hope to give me the last opportunity to improve my score and extending processing time till 18th of December. So, I can reach to 67 points.
I am so sorry for that issue but the result was a shock for me and it is unexpected. I know this excuse is unacceptable and irrational but your help in this issue will be appreciate.
Please I need this opportunity. My family and I love Canada and we like to spend the remaining days of our lives there.

Thanks for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

 

[ihosam]

Dears, anybody correct it please.

 

[zakout76]

how much u score u got?
and how much u need to reach 67?

 

[rehaan]

the result was a shock for me and it is unexpected. My family and I love Canada and we like to spend the remaining
days of our lives there

remove these try to make it more practical

 

[zakout76]

i have same soutation
but i have altervative soulation that send letter that i know basic level in french it will work?
and i can establish finance good in canada it will work?

i need 5 points in english but i took
4.5
4.5
4.5
5.5 s

pls advice
thanks

 

[ihosam]

overall 5
i need 12 points

thanks Rehaan, anyone can check it all.

 

[ihosam]

I think french letter will not help because they need TEF for french even you are on basic level.

I will try to focus on English and prepare well for next exam if i am luck and not process my file :-[

 

[memo74]

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter in order to point out that I have not got the appropriate score in my IELTS exam on 25th of September.

I would like you to give me another chance to improve my score in order to extend my processing time till 18th of December.
I am so sorry for not having a good result.Really I was shocked. I know this excuse will not be accepted but I would appreciate your help in this matter.
As I and my family love Canada and would like to spend our lives there.

In advance I would like to thank you for your time and help in this matter.

Yours faithfaully

 

[wxyz123]

Hi mates,
I will send this letter to visa office on London, please check it and give me your advise.
thank you.





File number:
Full name:
Date of birth:
Mailing address:
E-mail address:
Telephone number:


Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter in order to inform you that I did not get the appropriate score for IELTS exam which it was on 25th of September.
I hope to give me the last opportunity to improve my score and extending processing time till 18th of December. So, I can reach to 67 points.
I am so sorry for that issue but the result was a shock for me and it is unexpected. I know this excuse is unacceptable and irrational but your help in this issue will be appreciate.
Please I need this opportunity. My family and I love Canada and we like to spend the remaining days of our lives there.

Thanks for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Dear Sir,

I took the Ielts test on 25th september but unfortunately result did not come out what I expected. This is due to the fact that I was unable to prepare well because of my hectic and tiring job schedule. But I assure you if you give me one last chance I will prove to you I am competent in English. I have registered for the next coming test date and I need a deadline from you till 18th december. I know the excuse seems unacceptable but I humbly request you to consider it as it has been my heartiest desire to settle in one of the greatest country in the world "Canada"

Your cooperation in this regard will be highly appreciated.

Hoping to hear from you soon and thanking you in anticipation.

Kind regards

....

 

[wxyz123]

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter in order to point out that I have not got the appropriate score in my IELTS exam on 25th of September.

I would like you to give me another chance to improve my score in order to extend my processing time till 18th of December.
I am so sorry for not having a good result.Really I was shocked. I know this excuse will not be accepted but I would appreciate your help in this matter.
As I and my family love Canada and would like to spend our lives there.

In advance I would like to thank you for your time and help in this matter.

Yours faithfaully

this is good as well. grammar is correct.

 

[ihosam]

thanks everybody
I appreciate your help

any more opinion..

 

[wxyz123]

thanks everybody
I appreciate your help

any more opinion..

pick good points from every post and make it

 

[rehaan]

;D he need something more to convince VO, hosham it is enough

 

[Gulshan Grover]

Hi mates,
I will send this letter to visa office on London, please check it and give me your advise.
thank you.





File number:
Full name:
Date of birth:
Mailing address:
E-mail address:
Telephone number:


Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter in order to inform you that I did not get the appropriate score for IELTS exam which it was on 25th of September.
I hope to give me the last opportunity to improve my score and extending processing time till 18th of December. So, I can reach to 67 points.
I am so sorry for that issue but the result was a shock for me and it is unexpected. I know this excuse is unacceptable and irrational but your help in this issue will be appreciate.
Please I need this opportunity. My family and I love Canada and we like to spend the remaining days of our lives there.

Thanks for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Could you please display your IELTS bands as I have noticed plenty of grammatical and syntax error in your letter. It is strongly advised please take a sincere preparation prior to re-appearing for the exam. I am not disappointing you, just advising you the best option.

Do not mention that you and your family like Canada. This is irrelevant information.

Good luck.