Hi Summerlong,
I think the IO rejected your application as you don't have BSc or Masteral degree. Besides, you copied most of the duties and responsibilities of 0213 posted on CIC website which gives negative impression from IO.
Below is what I got from one of the site:
The occupation of 0213 Computer and Information Systems Managers comes under the category of 021 Managers in Engineering, Architecture, Science and Information Systems. This is a Middle level Management Occupation. This is one of the 38 professions required for Canadian Immigration.
Overview:
Computer and information systems managers plan, organize, direct, control and appraise the activities of associations and organizations that analyze, design, develop, implement, operate and manage computer and telecommunications networks, software, and information systems. They are employed throughout the public and private sectors.
Main duties of 0213 Computer and Information Systems Managers:
Computer and information systems managers perform some or all of the following duties:
1. Plan, organize, control, evaluate and direct the operations of information systems and electronic data processing (EDP) departments and companies.
2. Develop and execute policies and procedures for electronic data processing and computer systems operations and development.
3. Meet with clients to talk about system requirements, specifications, costs and timelines
Assemble and manage teams of information systems persons to design, develop, implement, operate and manage computer and telecommunications software, networks and information systems.
4. Control the financial plan and expenditures of the department, company or project.
5. Employ and oversee computer analysts, engineers, programmers, technicians and other personnel and oversee their professional development and training.
Employment requirements for 0213 Computer and Information Systems Managers:
1. A bachelor's or master's degree in computer science, business administration, commerce or engineering is usually required.
2. Several years of experience in systems analysis, data administration, software engineering, network design or computer programming, including supervisory experience, are required.
