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Should have mentioned a glimpse of your proposed solutions as well in the intro. Overall ideas are good but need to maintain a smooth flow between the statements. In your second para, the topic sentence should tell the reader about your solutions. your topic sentence is not hitting the...

In my opinion, your response is not answering the question asked. The question is, to what extent do you agree that performing well in an interview is key to secure a job? Now the possibilities are, either you agree, partially agree or disagree. if you agree to the hypothesis, then the reasons...

Your essay could be right but your topic sentence doesn't sound to me like a valid reason for ppl doing more shopping. The question is "Why is this the case". So, we need to write the reasons for ppl doing more shopping. then explain the reason or elaborate the reason. Revised 1st para: There...

I can't really predict scores. But should be good for a 6 i think

(I feel you messed it up here. The points from the good introduction are not followed in to your body paragraph. You have started a new idea alltogether.) another version of the first paragraph based on your introduction. To begin with, high ticket prices is a serious contributor to this low...

@cansha Computers are increasingly used in education. In which areas do you think are computers more important and in which areas are teachers more important? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge. Use of computers in the area academics is...

you may refer this thread in the same forum. Try reading all the comments and experiences from page1. good stuff and might be helpful to achieve your desired scores. Otherwise, check with Ben from ieltspodcast site(paid service it is). IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

Ok, I am planning to test my luck with BC in next attempt. Did you find any major difference?

Sure I will do whatever I can. Which location have you appeared and with which provider IDP or BC? Btw I have appeared twice with IDP Hyd and got 6 both times. My problem is, the moment I see the time, my mind goes blank and I end up writing some illogical essays.

there is a huge difference between 6.5 to 7 but 7 to 7.5 is doable is what I heard. If you have already cracked the code for 7, getting a 0.5 extra shouldn't a big ask. All the best

With the advent of technology in every walk of our life, space exploration is no more exception. Due to the cutting-edge technology and scientific discoveries, mankind has a great opportunities to investigate boundless space. There are some critics (why are the critics supporting the motion?)...

You should get an invite in a few more draws (cannot really predict how many). If I am in your situation, I would aim for CLB 10 while waiting for the invite. All the best.

Please do not take it harshly. I only intend to improve your essay and my essay writing skills while reviewing this. I am sure it can still get better. Maybe @cansha can add to it or correct your essay and my review comments. As @cansha said in this group once, we all are better writers than...

Nuclear Energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand, agree or disagree? In general, nuclear energy is preferred over other forms of energy to cater to the ever-demanding energy needs of planet earth. As it is one of the cleanest ways of generating power, I would agree to its...

@cansha If you get some time please have a look at my essay. Thanks in advance. Government investment in the arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?? It is...

Hi Priyanka, I am a newbie to this forum and cannot really do an assessment sentence by sentence like other members here, However, I have few comments on your task1 length and task2 introduction. Task1: Try not to exceed 180 words, as this will take your valuable time and increase the chances...

Can someone take a look at this and let me know how can I improve my writing task2. Thanks in advance. The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. what...