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@Gagan4790 @cansha @H0peAndFa1th please evaluate this essay. Topic: Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address the problems? What can individual people do? The fact that environmental deterioration is caused due to human activities...

Thanks for review.

Hi @cansha @H0peAndFa1th after reading more than 100 essay correction from this thread, I have tried to write this essay. Please evaluate. Topic: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or...

I did actually post the link here but the post was edited by ADMIN and the link was removed, in that Yu tube link Chris has done the video with the girl and asked her to reproduce the essay that she wrote in exam. You can find his channel on you tube and this video is there.

@cansha @H0peAndFa1th please evaluate the essay below. :) Topic: Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Healthcare...

Sorry, I forgot to mention that this student got band 8.5 in writing in real IELTS exam for same essay.

@cansha I can not force you to evaluate my essays as you have been doing it voluntarily. I did that just because I have followed the methods by Chris and wanted to know if an essay appreciated by him is really what he thinks of it.

Thanks for evaluation bro, to me it seems that one examiner to another there is a huge difference in how they look at essays. If Chris from the IELTS Advantage is to be believed this essay is an 8.5 band essay. Some of his student re-wrote this essay for showing it to the other students and he...

@cansha @H0peAndFa1th please evaluate. Some think that only those people who have worked for a company for many years should be promoted to a higher position. Do you agree? There is an opinion that primarily staff members who have dedicated many years to working for a particular company should...

@cansha @H0peAndFa1th please evaluate

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@cansha you have given a lot to this forum words are not enough to thank you guys. @H0peAndFa1th you have equally supported all the times and also whenever @cansha is not available. Thanks In Tons Guys..... :)

@cansha @H0peAndFa1th Planing to write again please help with the evaluation. Topic: In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay...

Congratulations bro... So happy for you