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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @ieltsOnly ..Can you also please provide your feedback on essay: Topic: First impression are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a job. To what extend do you agree? Essay: In this era of bottleneck competition, corporate industries are hiring...
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @ieltsOnly I really appreciate your efforts on reviewing the essay and providing detailed feedback ……
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @cansha , @Not_Your_Donkey_Kong ..can you review the essay below and provide your feedback. Thanks in advance Topic: Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while other think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss...
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @cansha can you review the essay and provide your feedback. Thanks in advance Topic: Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while other think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both opinion and give examples. Essay: In recent times, pet...
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @cansha , can you please review these introductions
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @cansha , I attempted to write the introduction for the below essay topics. Can you please review them once and provide your feedback. Thanks in advance. Essay: Some people believe that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To what extend do you agree...
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    Thanks so much @cansha for your time and guidance. I will try to exercise all of it in the next post and hope to see less of red lines in that. Thanks so much once again.
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @cansha , can you please review the essay below. Thanks in advance Topic: Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problem is to increase the cost of the fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Essay: In this era of epoch due to growing urbanization and...
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    Thanks so much @cansha for all your suggestions. Space after full stop when starting the new line is due to the copy-paste thing. Have taken a note of it and also will work on all your pointers. Thanks again
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @cansha , Can you please review the below essay, I will be highly thankful for your suggestions. Topic: In some of the societies the number of the crimes by teenagers is growing.Some people think regardless of the age,teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment.To what...
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @AB17 , @cansha , @dotslash227 Please review the below essay........Thanks in advance Q.The growing number of overweight people is putting strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issue involved.Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to...
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @dotslash227 , @AB17 , @cansha Please review the below essay..........Thanks in advance Q. Over the last few decades there has been increase in international tourism.Some people think that tourism is beneficial for local communities and should be encouraged.To what extent do you agree or...
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @dotslash227 Thanks for your feedback.I have used "utterly" because it means 'Absolutely' or Completely or Totally.Please correct me if I am wrong.Once again thanks for your time and suggestions.I'll definitely work on the above stated areas.
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    @AB17 Thanks for your valuable feedback.I'll work on the areas that you have highlighted.........
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    IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

    Thanks for providing your valuable feedback.I'll work on the mistakes that you have highlighted....