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IELTS Advantage challenge #1 Introduction Paraphrase: Many people argue in favor of disseminating a vast amount of information to the public through different means, namely science or academic papers. Others thinks that there is highly sensitive information that must be confidential. While...

engross: deep in thought, be trapped in thought of, thinking without, looked into our world, concious (absorto, ensimismado) blunt, bluntness (contundente, brusco, romo) to put in bluntly entangle, tangle up, strings up ensnred (enredar, atascar) it is an actionable issue, so it can be bring...

Please score this essay. Thanks Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Today, there is sharp debate about what is the best...

Essay topics: In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your...

I did not see your replay. Thanks for your suggestions. I' ll try to get rid of all those "unnecessary expressions" that only serve as filling for my essay.

Please @Praxis, I appreciate your sincere advise and suggestion about my writing. Please, take 5 minutes of your wonderful life to make happier another soul. Check my last draft. Thanks Essay topics: Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to...

Please @Praxis , I appreciate your sincere advise and suggestion about my writing. Please, take 5 minutes of your wonderful life to make happier another soul. Check my last draft. Thanks. Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly...

Please score this essay. Thanks Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Today, there is sharp debate about what is the best...

I wrote this essay a couple weeks ago. Since here, there are helpful people (Ms./Mr. Cansha) who are genuinely interested in our success, I please ask you that if you have nothing to do this weekend or the upcoming days, give a quick check to my draft. I appreciate. ESSAY: Some people aim to...

Thanks for your suggestions and advise. Yes, you are right, I overuse these type of expressions: ..it is a fact, it is undeniable, there is no doubt, bla bla bla..... maybe thinking that I can add an emphasis on my arguments. And, although laughable, I want overweigh kids shed their extra...

The given diagram depicts the different steps involved in the brick manufacturing process. Overall, brick production comprises seven stages, starting from the digging stage and ending in the delivery stage. First, the clay is digging out by a larger dragger machine, which put the clay over a...

The chart illustrates the different social and economic areas in which UAE government spent its national funding by 2000. Overall, the highest investment of this budget was made on Social Security, while the least proportion was on transport. As can be seen from the chart, the largest amount...

Please, take 5 minutes of your free time to check my last draft, point out my mistakes and suggest useful solutions. Thanks! Essay topics: Childhood obesity is increasing at rapid rates in developed countries. What are some of the causes of this problem? What are some ways in which childhood...

Please, take 5 minutes of your free time to check my last draft, point out my mistakes and suggest useful solutions. Thanks! Essay topics: Childhood obesity is increasing at rapid rates in developed countries. What are some of the causes of this problem? What are some ways in which childhood...

Please, if you have free time, point out my mistakes and also score my last essay. Thanks! Government investment in the arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?? The...