Urgent Help needed regarding Ielts results please read and give comments

[Drooza]

To,
Canadian High commission
Immigration Section,
38 Grosvenor Street,
London, WIK 4 AA, UK.

Subject: Explanation Regarding IELTS Results / File

Dear Sir/Madam

I took the Ielts test on 25th September but unfortunately result did not come out what I expected. Listening 5 Reading 4.5 Writing 5.5 and Speaking 6.0 Overall Band 5.5.
As per Ielts results seems that I am still on the same level of English as before but it is not true.
I am very much confident that I have done very well in ielts test but the results are not the same what I expected.
Therefore I apply for EOR Enquiry on Results it will take approximately six to eight weeks to get new results the result will be provided to Canadian High commission upon arrival.
I apply for EOR because I have taken two months English language courses to improve my ability. Please find attached First certificate from E4u English 4 You its American English language center in makkah they have 1 to 8 levels for students when I went there they asked me to set for entry test, after the test they suggested me to enroll in level 8.
After enrollment I started classes with them on 3rd July 2010 till 17th August 2010 the class was one & half hour every day. We were six students, I was better in progress than others. After one month they give us final test and I got A Grade as shown in the certificate and this center is recognized by Ministry of Education Saudi Arabia.
After this course I got admission in British Council Jeddah 18th August 2010 upon Placement test I was suggested to enroll in PI3 per Intermediate 3 but unfortunately there was no place in PI3.
I was confused what to do because I was very much interested to take classes in British Council. So I discussed with administration to help me to get enrollment in any class which improves my English language.
Luckily there was place in PI2 Pre Intermediate 2 and they told if you want to enroll in this class its better for you, because you will be more polished in language as you need just some tips to improve your ability.
I enrolled in PI2, the course duration was 40 Hours it was very good experience with British Council.
Please find attached PI2 certificate and test results.
I am more confident and energetic than ever after taking these courses and I will continue my studies as well as in Canada to get settle.
I am professional more than ten years experience in national and international companies I have very good prestige people knows me very well due to my hard working. My feeling is that if I had chance to immigrant to Canada, I will prove myself highly skilled person for Canadian market. I have ability to control total project activities to provide technical support to engineers attending meeting discussing specification with consultants writing reports to project manager and to consultants. Recently I had completed first semester of civil engineering and transcript was provided to Canadian high commission in last submittal as additional documents, this degree is totally in English I had very good results. Soon second semester will be completed.
My confidence and years of experience will not put me down in any company in this world as a Drafting Technologist.
As you can see that my all education is in English and in our office we have many different nationalities working with us and the common language use all the time is English, our all meetings and documentation in English language Arabic used only in some cases like governmental tenders and enquiries.
Therefore I am sending my Ielts results and other require documents through British council. Most of the documents from my employer in Canada already included in this package.
Some documents requested directly from employer they told me that we will send directly to visa office.

I know the excuse seems unacceptable but I humbly request you to consider it as it has been my heartiest desire to settle in one of the greatest country in the world "Canada"

Your cooperation in this regard will be highly appreciated
Thanks for your time and consideration

Yours faithfully

 

[saedmahraan]

sorry for that

but you should repeat ielts

otherwise cic will not consider your letter

do not stop at the station to wait the bus
you must run to catch it

regards

 

[Cappuccino]

CHC are exceptionally strict now and will only accept proof of language from one of their approved testing centres, IELTS being the most common. Why are the results unacceptable, do you need higher marks in order to meet the 67 point criteria?

Also, and I mean this with respect, but the letter you have drafted to CHC London is crawling with grammatical errors and spelling mistakes ("enrollment" should be spelt "enrolment", IELTS should be capitalised, and there are quite a lot of errors in grammar in the structure of your sentences, etc). At the very least you should run your letter through a spelling and grammar checking tool such as Microsoft Word.

I am not criticising, I am just trying to demonstrate how CHC will assess your plea that your standard of English is higher than the IELTS results would suggest.

I think your best option, if you cannot make 67 points with these results, is to reschedule your IELTS test, and if this falls outside the 120 day period then write to London saying that you will forward the results the moment they arrive and state the exact date you expect to receive them. I am fairly sure they will only award enough points if you provide approved test results to back up your language claims, so your best hope is that they allow you a small extension in order to complete another test.

Wayne.

 

[Drooza]

Dear Cappuccino
i know this kind of letters wont help any more but my story is different,

Edu. 22

exp. 21

English 6

Age 10

AEO 10

Ad. 9

Total score 78

visa officer not happy with my ielts score i was given chance to provide additional documents to prove my english ability and i told them give me time to appear in new IELTS test but unfortunately results front of you this was my last chance to prove myself that i have good command of english.my employer send me letter from canada that we dont have problem with you english level its ok for this job and i send this letter to visa office and after that still he is killing me i dont know.

this was my old ielts score L 5 R 5 W 4.5 S 6 overall 5 6 points

This is new results L 5 R 4.5 W 5.5 S 6 Overall 5.5 6 point

know you tell me what to do there is no problem 67 points there is a problem that he is not going give points for AEO if not then i can make is up to 67 so that is story please correct my letter if you can.
me and my family in big tension please help.

 

[Cappuccino]

Dear Cappuccino
i know this kind of letters wont help any more but my story is different,

Edu. 22

exp. 21

English 6

Age 10

AEO 10

Ad. 9

Total score 78

visa officer not happy with my ielts score i was given chance to provide additional documents to prove my english ability and i told them give me time to appear in new IELTS test but unfortunately results front of you this was my last chance to prove myself that i have good command of english.my employer send me letter from canada that we dont have problem with you english level its ok for this job and i send this letter to visa office and after that still he is killing me i dont know.

this was my old ielts score L 5 R 5 W 4.5 S 6 overall 5 6 points

This is new results L 5 R 4.5 W 5.5 S 6 Overall 5.5 6 point

know you tell me what to do there is no problem 67 points there is a problem that he is not going give points for AEO if not then i can make is up to 67 so that is story please correct my letter if you can.
me and my family in big tension please help.

Hmm, I agree it's unlikely they will allow you to take a third test.

How long do you have before you must get back to them? Is it not possible to try to get another test scheduled?

Your results are moderate, I am unsure why they won't credit your AEO without better results. Is this a teaching profession or similar?

If you don't have time for another IELTS test, then all you can really do is draft the best letter you can and send any other documents you have available to prove your English. Please do make sure you spell and grammar check your letter, because obviously such mistakes will reflect poorly your standard of English.

Best of luck to you,
Wayne.

 

[shibuya]

I doubt the VO will be convinced but friend pray daily as it could trigger a miracle.

 

[Drooza]

thanks guys i dont now what to do i am doing my bast my noc is 2253 drafting technologist do you think this kind of noc need high band score i dont think so.

 

[msaleem216]

i think u should reapply for ielts and write chc that u could not appear in exam so pl giv u some time more
saleem

 

[Drooza]

salam saleem bhi

how r you? i don't think vo will give me more time. he already given two chances to me but i can't make it. i think he is more strick with ielts and there is no value of AEO anymore with application.what do you think what to do without ielts? i must send this result i dont have any more chance to pretend.please suggest what to do?

 

[Cappuccino]

salam saleem bhi

how r you? i don't think vo will give me more time. he already given two chances to me but i can't make it. i think he is more strick with ielts and there is no value of AEO anymore with application.what do you think what to do without ielts? i must send this result i dont have any more chance to pretend.please suggest what to do?

IMO you have only 2 choices

1) Send this result within their deadline and await their decision

2) Do not send the result, reschedule test and tell them the date of the test. Hope they allow an extension to take the test, no guarantee of this of course.

I guess you have to ask yourself, which choice are you more likely to fail with - sending these results within the time frame, or sending another set of results after the deadline (without any guarantee they'll be better).

Personally I'd go with option A and just hope for the best.
Wayne.

 

[msaleem216]

DEAR DAROOZA,

I THINK Wayne. NO2 POINT WIL SUIT U MORE IF UR RESULT IS SAME LIKE BEFORE U HAVE SENT BUT IT IS UP TO U. IF U LIKE U CAN SEND THEM OTHER SUPPORTING DOC LIKE U R WORKING IN ENG ATMOSHERE AND UR QULIFTICATION IS FROM SOME ENG MEDIUM SCHOOL AND U R GOING TO APPEAR IN IELTS EXAM AND U SHOULD PRACTICE SOME BEST TRAINER BEC IELTS IS JUST A TRICK U CAN CROSS. BUT BETTER U CAN DECIDE URSELF WE PRAY U
SALEEM

 

[Drooza]

Asking for more time and after that improvement in result no guarantee. because very busy life no time for ielts practice. i have seen many applicant who got immigration on 5.5 i dont know why he is asking me more that is ok i think i can improve automagically when i am living in english language country.
i think better to send this ielts score and wait for good.

 

[Gulshan Grover]

thanks guys i dont now what to do i am doing my bast my noc is 2253 drafting technologist do you think this kind of noc need high band score i dont think so.

Sorry to inform you that please improve your english language skill. If you make your band at least moderate level that will be fine to go ahead by the CHC,London. It is obvious that your english is in basic level in some of the modules, therefore, it may be difficult for you to immigrate to Canada.

You have got AEO which is providing you with more than enough points. Because of basic english proficiency immigration officer will not be fully convinced.

Just be confident. I am praying for you. Don't be disappointed. Just do your best and leave rest for god.

Good luck.

 

[Drooza]

thanks dear i will try my best

 

[zakout76]

dsooza
u already get 67 points? or no?
thanks
zakout