I am applying for an student visa in Canada and I need a study plan. I drafted one can anyone help me to improve or make it right? thank you in advance.
here my email ID: leonardalmonte028@gmail.com
Dear Visa Officer,
I am ____________, age 26, and was born on the __th day of February year 1991. Ever since I first learn about computers I was captivated by its features and uses. That’s why I took up my Computer Hardware Servicing at Techskills Philippines Incorporated. After I finished my course, I started working at computer shops as a computer and network maintenance, but the desire to have a better job and my hunger for more knowledge pushed me into the search of a new course that will help me qualify to a higher job position. I found Centennial College in Canada which offers Computer System Technology – Networking which will polish my academic skills and is in accordance with my requirements. Also, the college promises good career outcome and I will have a chance to further my studies to bachelor’s degree with their Co – op program. Moreover, Centennial college is known for their hands-on approach of the computer system technology – networking course and focuses on the latest in computer systems in which I can learn and gain plenty of practical practice.
Furthermore, Canadian education system has a very good reputation and assures quality education and also, it is a safe and multicultural country with a welcoming environment. Studying in Canada is a turning point of my career and will ensure a bright future for me because Canadian education is being recognise world wide specially here in the Philippines. I plan on returning in my homeland after my study in Canada to apply on my target job which has a much higher salary than of my current job. Along with a golden diploma and a strong educational back ground, I will surely get the position I am dreaming of. Also, more importantly, I will be staying together with my family which the very important to me because I am from a small yet warm family and I cannot imagine living far away from each other. In addition, all of the investments that me and my family have accumulated are here in the Philippines.
I hope that you will consider my interest and will give me a chance to study in a better institution.
BEST REGARDS,
here my email ID: leonardalmonte028@gmail.com
Dear Visa Officer,
I am ____________, age 26, and was born on the __th day of February year 1991. Ever since I first learn about computers I was captivated by its features and uses. That’s why I took up my Computer Hardware Servicing at Techskills Philippines Incorporated. After I finished my course, I started working at computer shops as a computer and network maintenance, but the desire to have a better job and my hunger for more knowledge pushed me into the search of a new course that will help me qualify to a higher job position. I found Centennial College in Canada which offers Computer System Technology – Networking which will polish my academic skills and is in accordance with my requirements. Also, the college promises good career outcome and I will have a chance to further my studies to bachelor’s degree with their Co – op program. Moreover, Centennial college is known for their hands-on approach of the computer system technology – networking course and focuses on the latest in computer systems in which I can learn and gain plenty of practical practice.
Furthermore, Canadian education system has a very good reputation and assures quality education and also, it is a safe and multicultural country with a welcoming environment. Studying in Canada is a turning point of my career and will ensure a bright future for me because Canadian education is being recognise world wide specially here in the Philippines. I plan on returning in my homeland after my study in Canada to apply on my target job which has a much higher salary than of my current job. Along with a golden diploma and a strong educational back ground, I will surely get the position I am dreaming of. Also, more importantly, I will be staying together with my family which the very important to me because I am from a small yet warm family and I cannot imagine living far away from each other. In addition, all of the investments that me and my family have accumulated are here in the Philippines.
I hope that you will consider my interest and will give me a chance to study in a better institution.
BEST REGARDS,
