inam plzz help.me regarding SOP

[peep]

bro see i have done cse diploma with 60 % n now got admission in computer system technician netwoking diploma ielts 6 bands i choose again but in my previous dipkoma there is basic info awt networking now this diploma contains brief so give me contant i wanna make a strong sop to convince visa officer so help.me bro
thanks in advice

 

[Inam89]

bro see i have done cse diploma with 60 % n now got admission in computer system technician netwoking diploma ielts 6 bands i choose again but in my previous dipkoma there is basic info awt networking now this diploma contains brief so give me contant i wanna make a strong sop to convince visa officer so help.me bro
thanks in advice

Hey, could you explain your post, I didn't get it
1. cse?
2. what do you mean by "i choose again" here?
3. your previous diploma has details about networking?
4. "this diploma" ? which diploma the previous one or the new one?

 

[peep]

19th 60% 2008
computer science diploma 2008 -2011
ielts 6bands
now get admission in computer system diploma networking coop georgian college
i waanna a strong sop contant from u
i have choose again diploma but in previous diploma of cse there is basic info awt networking but in this diploma brief info awt networking so plzz gave me contant to convince vosa officer
thNks for ur quick rply dude

 

[Inam89]

19th 60% 2008
computer science diploma 2008 -2011
ielts 6bands
now get admission in computer system diploma networking coop georgian college
i waanna a strong sop contant from u
i have choose again diploma but in previous diploma of cse there is basic info awt networking but in this diploma brief info awt networking so plzz gave me contant to convince vosa officer
thNks for ur quick rply dude

I am from the generation which saw the world changing, calculator replaced by scientific calculators, telephone replaced by mobile phones, typing machines replaced by computers etc. This rapid development in the field of computer and technology always amazed me. I don't forget the feeling when I used computer for the first time, doing calculation in excel, painting, playing games. Very early in my educational life, I developed the desire to be among the experts of computer technology. This desire evolved into a strong motivating force as I grew up and helped me to achieve my aims. I have completed my 3 years diploma in computer science. WRITE SOME DETAIL ABOUT YOUR DIPLOMA HERE. and mention the subject you studies relating to networking, labs and projects you did that is related to networking.

The field of computer science is a new world in itself. A lot of research is being carried out these days in the field of computer networking. It wouldn't be wrong to say that the whole computer world revolves around this field. Our banking system, internet, emailing all these things are possible due to networking. This is a field of high demand and I believe that my previous qualification i.e. diploma is computer science was very generic. It did provide me exposure to networking but I feel the desire to learn more about computer network. This desire to achieve expertise in the field of networking motivated me to do XYZ diploma for this college.

You got some points, work on it, improve it and that's it.

BR,
Inam

 

[shujaattt]

inam you are extremely helpful man.

 

[Inam89]

inam you are extremely helpful man.

You are always welcome to pay me the tip 8)

 

[shujaattt]

yeah sure why not..but only on one condition if i reach canada and earn dollarssssssssssss

 

[Inam89]

yeah sure why not..but only on one condition if i reach canada and earn dollarssssssssssss

When you reach canada you will spend dollars

 

[shujaattt]

dont worry inam i will ask baba hoti to leave some easy load for you after all he has added so much easy loads to his big pocket.

 

[peep]

thnxx bro for helping me
first +1 from me to anybody

 

[peep]

thnxx bro for helping me
first +1 from me to anybody

 

[Inam89]

thnxx bro for helping me
first +1 from me to anybody

So I am the chosen one

Thanks for the tip