Got refused 2 times!

[abeselom]

hello,i am from Ethiopia and i submitted my 1st application on 19/10/2017 and got a refusal letteron 16/11/2017 with the reason of purpose of visit.
and my 2nd application was submitted on 11/01/2018 and got a refusal letter on 17/01/2018 with the reason of
1)travel history
2)length of proposed stay
3)personal assets and financial status
4)and finally purpose of visit

-the d/t thing about my 2nd application is the financial document I showed was instead of a bank statement I showed my mothers wire credit and my passport was going to expire on October of 2018 and also when I fill the form in the section of employment I was doing jobs as an intern in the summer of 2015.16,17.

if anyone has any idea what I should for my next application need your help.

 

[Prajwalsharmaa]

Discuss full profile
Including ielta
Academic and proposed course of study

 

[abeselom]

thanks for the reply,in my imm1294 form under the employment section i have filled that i was working as an intern for 2 summers while i was in highschool(11and12) does the travel history have anything to do with this

 

[russ6970]

You have to show your full profile. Where did you apply to and what course. What are the scores you got in
ielts. have you traveled outside Ethiopia? Are you able to support yourself financially...including international fees (at least 15k per year). What are your education scores

 

[abeselom]

Hello,i am from ethiopia and 19,i was rejected for a study permit twice my first refusal was in nov16 2017 after i applied for a study permit on oct 19 2017 and got a refusal based on purpose of visit only.
and i submitted my second application on jan 11 2018 and got refual on jan 17 2018 on the refusal letter it states that i have not satisfied to leave canada as the end of my stay based on
1)length of proposed stay--i have fixed this one i think iit was related to my passport,that my passport was going to expire in 7 months and i have renewed my passport now.
2)personal assets and financial status--also i have shown my mom's annual salary of USD26,688,a house wiz a total value of CAD343,987 and since i couldnt show my moms bank statement the second time round because it wasn' t suffecient i showed only my moms credit union account of USD30,000 does zis affect my application.
3)purpose of visit--i have showed ties to my home country i also have a job waiting for me upon my return what do u tnk i should do
4)travel history--and on this i am desperate if anyone can tell me what this means????i have no travel history

And also on the imm1294 form there was a slight d/ce of change from the first one like address and i have also included under the employment section my summer intern job and my youth volunteer job??any response would be appreciated thank you.

 

[abeselom]

Z course zat i applied is on buisness administration and i was learning civil engineering in my country u @algonquin college