Cover letter to address the refusal

[zhazha]

Hi to all!!!

I just like to seek any idea on how to write or what have to mention in a cover letter to address the reason of previous refusal.. I was refused for this reason "family ties in the Philippines and in Canada... I want to make a cover letter stressing that I have a strong family ties here in the Philippines even I am a single but I still have and old aged parents which i have to be back here after my contract is ended. My parents need me to look after them especially I am the only one who is still single and all my brothers have their own families already and besides i am the only daughter so i have the full responsibilities of taking care of them. Do you think i have strong evidence to address my refusal.

Guys what are the other points to consider showing strong family ties that I have to mention in my cover letter? Is it needs to be notarized?

Thank you...

 

[charmainefrances]

The reasons you have given are good enough.But there are some factors as well, do you have a stable job there in the Philippines? They will look at it too. You have to have a good job record. Meaning, you still have a work opportunity when you come back to the Philippines.

As for me when I applied in 2009, I was single but I have a son, and my parents are still there. And I have a good work record.

 

[zhazha]

Thank you for sharing some information i really appreciate it...