Hello , I'm applying online and I decided to write a letter of explanation in order to explain a few things about my application , I was hoping someone can review it to see if it's appropriate or not
here's what I wrote :
Hello , this is applicant Othman Najim I write to you to inform you about a few things concerning my application , concerning form IMM5645E you will notice that I haven't specified the day and month of my father's date of birth , That's because they aren't registered with the country , in most of his official documents only the year of birth is mentioned , also on the proof of means of financial support I have combined a series of pdf files on one file , before each file I have included a page that explains what each document is , and on my letter of acceptance you'll find the letter of acceptance along with the fees and scholarship I have received from the university I have also included an email from the universities scholarship department that explains that my scholarship has been deferred to fall 2016 due to the time it takes to get a study permit .
Yours truly,
Applicant Othman Najim
here's what I wrote :
Hello , this is applicant Othman Najim I write to you to inform you about a few things concerning my application , concerning form IMM5645E you will notice that I haven't specified the day and month of my father's date of birth , That's because they aren't registered with the country , in most of his official documents only the year of birth is mentioned , also on the proof of means of financial support I have combined a series of pdf files on one file , before each file I have included a page that explains what each document is , and on my letter of acceptance you'll find the letter of acceptance along with the fees and scholarship I have received from the university I have also included an email from the universities scholarship department that explains that my scholarship has been deferred to fall 2016 due to the time it takes to get a study permit .
Yours truly,
Applicant Othman Najim