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Can any original english speaker and know NOC too help update my employer letter

yixiaop26

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HI

Is any original english speaker and know what's mean NOC

try to help update my employer letter to make it much accurate with the NOC 2283 , not make close to NOC A , (I have changed a lot for it )

Please focus on syntax too.

MANY MANY thanks.

NOC 2283


Main duties


Information systems testing technicians perform some or all of the following duties:
Develop and document software testing plans
Install software and hardware and configure operating system software in preparation for testing
Execute, analyze and document results of software application tests and information and telecommunication systems tests
Develop and implement software and information system testing policies, procedures and scripts.



Lead requirements documentation review for software projects in represent of quality assurance team.

Analyze software product background and features based on the function specification document and team member's feedback to define and write test objectives which including both high level test plan and low level detail test plan in consist of function test, basic feature integration cases, compatibility test, purify test, doc test , stress test, stability test and review, update, maintain them in time.

Participates in planning, scheduling and executing software testing projects which include preparing software/scripts or hardware test environment such as install, configure general test software: purify, Valgrind .etc, making policies/strategies for the whole test procedure, executing the test cases, organizing and report in each test steps/phases and results in paper, oral, or email format or directly in defect/bug systems.

Write test scenario which cover high degree feature integration test, system integration test, cross product integration test, performance test.

Runs complex test cases of software LSF projects, certain cases may involve multi features and each feature completed by a separated project . These cases need experienced engineer to execute.

Proposes end-to-end user experience review and test cases, these cases is a reflection of customer's user case, and different with academic test cases. They need seriously ponder on huge and complex customer's configuration to make reasonable test cases choices. .

Build and use complex test tools to enhance software test case execution efficiency.

Analyzes review/test results and coverages of each software LSF release, provide software product quality assessments and suggestions to support and sales related engineer for business decision.
 

LPS

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Aug 7, 2013
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Category........
Visa Office......
CPC-O
NOC Code......
2174
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
06-08-2013
AOR Received.
07-10-2013
Med's Request
07-03-2014
Med's Done....
26-03-2014
LANDED..........
09-04-2014
It's easy enough for someone to proofread your letter, but you also want them to change your duties to match a certain NOC?

What is the level A NOC code you are trying to get away from?
 

ZingyDNA

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Aug 12, 2013
1,252
185
Category........
Visa Office......
CPP-Ottawa
NOC Code......
2111
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
28-06-2013
AOR Received.
28-08-2013
IELTS Request
Sent with Application
Med's Request
21-02-2014 (principal applicant)
Med's Done....
07-03-2014 (both, upfront for spouse)
Passport Req..
10-04-2014
VISA ISSUED...
22-04-2014
LANDED..........
13-06-2014
Yeah correcting typos/grammar is one thing, matching NOC code is totally different..
 

yixiaop26

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LPS said:
It's easy enough for someone to proofread your letter, but you also want them to change your duties to match a certain NOC?

What is the level A NOC code you are trying to get away from?
like NOC 2173

could you correct syntax error firstly
 

salmon1978

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Jan 3, 2013
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I don't think you need to write your duties in that much detail. Several sentences would be good enough as long as your employer is credible.
It's also easier to ask your friend to proofread the letter for you. It's not a super complicated letter - doesn't have to be error free, either. Many non-original English speakers and non-Masters can do that. :D
 

maniac2403

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Mar 19, 2013
1,103
107
Category........
Visa Office......
CPP-O
NOC Code......
1122
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
18-11-2013
Doc's Request.
29-05-2014
AOR Received.
27-12-2013
IELTS Request
Provided with application
File Transfer...
04-06-2014 (ECAS In Process)
Med's Request
10-06-2014
Med's Done....
11-06-2014
Interview........
None
Passport Req..
20-06-2014
VISA ISSUED...
27-06-2014 (Visa stamp) 9-07-2014 (Passport Received)
LANDED..........
10-07-2014
yixiaop26 said:
Review requirements documentation for software projects as part of the quality assurance team.

Analyze functional specifications documents of software products to define and write high level and detailed test plans for the purposes of functional, integration, compatibility, purify, doc, stress and stability testing.

Participates in planning, scheduling and executing software testing projects which include preparing software/scripts or hardware test environment such as install, configure general test software: purify, Valgrind .etc, making policies/strategies for the whole test procedure, executing the test cases, organizing and report in each test steps/phases and results in paper, oral, or email format or directly in defect/bug systems.

Runs complex test cases of software LSF projects, certain cases may involve multi features and each feature completed by a separated project . These cases need experienced engineer to execute.

Proposes end-to-end user experience review and test cases, these cases is a reflection of customer's user case, and different with academic test cases. They need seriously ponder on huge and complex customer's configuration to make reasonable test cases choices. .


Build and use complex test tools to enhance software test case execution efficiency.

Analyze and review results of software LSF releases and provide software product quality assessments and suggestions to support and sales team.
See my edits in Navy. The ones in RED above seem to imply the same thing as the second statement. Bear in mind, this is coming from a non technical person.
 

yixiaop26

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maniac2403 said:
See my edits in Navy. The ones in RED above seem to imply the same thing as the second statement. Bear in mind, this is coming from a non technical person.
yes, I see, but actually , they are different. it is more like write a letter than an essay.
 

yixiaop26

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below is 2173
Collect and document users' requirements and develop logical and physical specifications
Research, evaluate and synthesize technical information to design, develop and test computer-based systems
Develop data, process and network models to optimize architecture and to evaluate the performance and reliability of designs
Plan, design and co-ordinate the development, installation, integration and operation of computer-based systems
Assess, test, troubleshoot, document, upgrade and develop maintenance procedures for operating systems, communications environments and applications software
May lead and co-ordinate teams of information systems professionals in the development of software and integrated information systems, process control software and other embedded software control systems.


If any of you feel that my above employer letter is similar or suspicious similar with 2173 , please help point out. very very thanks ..............