+1(514) 937-9445 or Toll-free (Canada & US) +1 (888) 947-9445

Applying tomorrow; SOP review

Rajgur

Star Member
Jun 15, 2019
191
23
background
10-6.6cgpa
12-55%
Bba -50%
Ielts-7.5
Refusals-2 from usa in 2016



To earn an international qualification from a renowned institute, I want to receive the study visa to pursue Business and International Commerce Import Export program offered by the Herzing College DLI#019338389261,Montreal,Quebec, Canada.


With regard to my educational background, I have been a sincere student so far. I have completed my Senior Secondary Education in Commerce Stream. With all my heart into Business and Trade I further pursued my professional education in Bachelors of Business Administration from *****.

During the time span of my graduation course,I learned about Business Environment, Fundamentals of capital markets,statistics for business,Computer Based Accounting System and more. I also completed number of assignments and capstone projects which helped me to gain practical knowledge about business and commerce.In addition,I got knowledge in depth about International Management, Legal Aspects of Business, Managerial Economics and business ethicswhich helped me to understand allot about core business operating area.


After the completion of my graduation in 2018,Looking for further academic options was a big question and when it came to obtaining professional experience I realized the need to delve deeper knowledge about commerce as a career choice.So I researched a lot about the Universities and colleges in India and abroad as well.

After doing an extensive research,I decided to pursue Business and International commerce import/export A.E.C program at Herzing College,Canada.

In order to provide my language proficiency skills, I took IELTS after completing my graduation and secured overall of 7.5bands.


Choosing Canada as an education destination became an obvious decision, the time I decided to pursue the chosen program from Herzing College.

Canada has maintained a high-quality education system. Other features like safety, student-friendly policies, research resources,culture orientations and school of thought on a single platform which is therefore a prerequisite for being an international professional convinced me and my parents to opt for Canada.


With a total of 1440 hours involving Theory,practical and internship,The program has been framed in such manner that it will guide me to know better about world trade regulations & laws.This program also provides a unique overview of Analyzing and Processing Data in the accounting cycle,Implementation of E-Commerce strategies,financial analysis of investment and financing projects and conduction of international business transactions with financial methods and tools.Therefore,this course will expose me to valuable skills recommended by the Forum for International Trade Training (FITT), which will help me to provide all the necessary tools to become a Certified International Trade Professional (CITP).

As India is one of the fastest growing economy,there is lots of scope in Import/Export sector.And in the past few years, Government of India has come up with a wide array ofprograms and schemes to encourage growth of established companies and launch of E-Commerce startups in the country.The Import Export sector in India has today become a key performance indicator of the economy.

Thus with the assistance of adequate expertise, it will expose me with variety of different career options in Customs,Export trading companies with managerial department positions in production,sales,trading ,logistics and accounts.


Herzing College has exemplary services to provide to overseas students with a high-quality education.And by going through the vast curriculum and structure of the program,it sparked my interest to improve my knowledge and become productive. I will have the opportunity to study subjects like

Business Application Software;Usage of Statistical Methods; Computerized Accounting;Importance Of Business Principles and Management, Business Mathematics,Spreadsheets and Databases,International Trade research and finance,Global Supply Chain Management,International Market Entry Strategies and more.


So Upon completion of the course and experience gained from my co-operative education program,Iam confident that my international education and global exposure will be very helpful in getting a suitable career worldwide.


Also, my parents have sufficient funds to pay the tuition fee and to take care of my living expenses while I am in Canada.

Along with my application, I am enclosing my LOA,CAQ and all other educational and financial documents for your kind inspection.


To summarize,I look forward to the growth and exposure that this course would provide me. Under the guidelines of IRCC iam fully aware of the conditions of the visa and take responsibility of my actions during the stay.so i would like to make a genuine request to the Visa Officerto kindly accept my application for approval.


Regards,





Did i exaggerated too much
Grammes mistakes
And other tips ?
 

Fabiog

Hero Member
Mar 22, 2017
397
58
Hi,
You need to mention that you will return to India and explain the reason why you will return to your home country .You just mentioned that you can get a job worldwide but you didn't mention India.
Good luck
 
  • Like
Reactions: Msbrar

HenryVo

Hero Member
Jun 2, 2019
274
51
background
10-6.6cgpa
12-55%
Bba -50%
Ielts-7.5
Refusals-2 from usa in 2016



To earn an international qualification from a renowned institute, I want to receive the study visa to pursue Business and International Commerce Import Export program offered by the Herzing College DLI#019338389261,Montreal,Quebec, Canada.


With regard to my educational background, I have been a sincere student so far. I have completed my Senior Secondary Education in Commerce Stream. With all my heart into Business and Trade I further pursued my professional education in Bachelors of Business Administration from *****.

During the time span of my graduation course,I learned about Business Environment, Fundamentals of capital markets,statistics for business,Computer Based Accounting System and more. I also completed number of assignments and capstone projects which helped me to gain practical knowledge about business and commerce.In addition,I got knowledge in depth about International Management, Legal Aspects of Business, Managerial Economics and business ethicswhich helped me to understand allot about core business operating area.


After the completion of my graduation in 2018,Looking for further academic options was a big question and when it came to obtaining professional experience I realized the need to delve deeper knowledge about commerce as a career choice.So I researched a lot about the Universities and colleges in India and abroad as well.

After doing an extensive research,I decided to pursue Business and International commerce import/export A.E.C program at Herzing College,Canada.

In order to provide my language proficiency skills, I took IELTS after completing my graduation and secured overall of 7.5bands.


Choosing Canada as an education destination became an obvious decision, the time I decided to pursue the chosen program from Herzing College.

Canada has maintained a high-quality education system. Other features like safety, student-friendly policies, research resources,culture orientations and school of thought on a single platform which is therefore a prerequisite for being an international professional convinced me and my parents to opt for Canada.


With a total of 1440 hours involving Theory,practical and internship,The program has been framed in such manner that it will guide me to know better about world trade regulations & laws.This program also provides a unique overview of Analyzing and Processing Data in the accounting cycle,Implementation of E-Commerce strategies,financial analysis of investment and financing projects and conduction of international business transactions with financial methods and tools.Therefore,this course will expose me to valuable skills recommended by the Forum for International Trade Training (FITT), which will help me to provide all the necessary tools to become a Certified International Trade Professional (CITP).

As India is one of the fastest growing economy,there is lots of scope in Import/Export sector.And in the past few years, Government of India has come up with a wide array ofprograms and schemes to encourage growth of established companies and launch of E-Commerce startups in the country.The Import Export sector in India has today become a key performance indicator of the economy.

Thus with the assistance of adequate expertise, it will expose me with variety of different career options in Customs,Export trading companies with managerial department positions in production,sales,trading ,logistics and accounts.


Herzing College has exemplary services to provide to overseas students with a high-quality education.And by going through the vast curriculum and structure of the program,it sparked my interest to improve my knowledge and become productive. I will have the opportunity to study subjects like

Business Application Software;Usage of Statistical Methods; Computerized Accounting;Importance Of Business Principles and Management, Business Mathematics,Spreadsheets and Databases,International Trade research and finance,Global Supply Chain Management,International Market Entry Strategies and more.


So Upon completion of the course and experience gained from my co-operative education program,Iam confident that my international education and global exposure will be very helpful in getting a suitable career worldwide.


Also, my parents have sufficient funds to pay the tuition fee and to take care of my living expenses while I am in Canada.

Along with my application, I am enclosing my LOA,CAQ and all other educational and financial documents for your kind inspection.


To summarize,I look forward to the growth and exposure that this course would provide me. Under the guidelines of IRCC iam fully aware of the conditions of the visa and take responsibility of my actions during the stay.so i would like to make a genuine request to the Visa Officerto kindly accept my application for approval.


Regards,





Did i exaggerated too much
Grammes mistakes
And other tips ?
I think you need to explain your grades.
No offense, but 50% in undergraduate is a very low grade (barely passing). This will be a red flag for the VO. If you don't mention and explain your low grades, the VO will take it as a sign that you might struggle in Canada and reject you for low academic records.

I recommend that you explain the reasons for the low grades (be genuine, no need to lie), and more importantly, explain steps you have taken to try to improve your grades and academic standings.
 

Rajgur

Star Member
Jun 15, 2019
191
23
I think you need to explain your grades.
No offense, but 50% in undergraduate is a very low grade (barely passing). This will be a red flag for the VO. If you don't mention and explain your low grades, the VO will take it as a sign that you might struggle in Canada and reject you for low academic records.

I recommend that you explain the reasons for the low grades (be genuine, no need to lie), and more importantly, explain steps you have taken to try to improve your grades and academic standings.
I know that but idk what should i write which will explain that i will work hard despite of low academics.
Can you suggest something
 

HenryVo

Hero Member
Jun 2, 2019
274
51
I know that but idk what should i write which will explain that i will work hard despite of low academics.
Can you suggest something
Did you have a job after graduation? If you do, you can use that as a baseline to prove you are trying to improve. Otherwise, if you have had any certificates and achievements after graduation, you can show those.
If you have none of the above, then you must prove it all in words. Explain how you have made mistakes during school, leading to low grades and what you learn from these mistakes. Then point out how you plan to improve upon these mistakes, etc.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Rajgur

Rajgur

Star Member
Jun 15, 2019
191
23
Won’t that make me defensive about my grades and highlight the negative side rather than focusing on showing positive aspects?
 

HenryVo

Hero Member
Jun 2, 2019
274
51
Won’t that make me defensive about my grades and highlight the negative side rather than focusing on showing positive aspects?
That will not highlight your negative side, instead, by openly acknowledging it, you lessen the negative effects it can have on your overall application.
Even if you don't bring it up, the VO will see the grades anyway. And bad grades is a reason for refusal so it will not be ignored by the VO.
 

Rupinder2050

Star Member
Jul 2, 2019
187
29
Ok. Well Have u submitted sop, if not introduce Ur family members and their designation.
And the thing is that Canada visa depends on luck
Today I went for biometrics and I met with guy in Chandigarh and his brother was refused even with 89% marks in 12 and 7.5 bands.
Reason- he would not leave Canada, country ties.
I mean how can vo judge that one is not going to leave Canada after study.
Even they know that only 5% people leave Canada after study.
 

Rupinder2050

Star Member
Jul 2, 2019
187
29
My friend did get visa for may intake.
Bcom 62% and IELTS 6( writing 5.5)
Offline application and refused and he applied again (online) and got visa in 10 days. Now he is in Canada.
So that person was not going to leave Canada after study and refused then he applied again now he got visa because vo now think that he would leave Canada. I mean come on