Need some assistance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Seniors..............

[brill]

Hi friends,
I need your assistance.
Please correct my this letter.


To,
Citizenship and Immigration,Canada
Federal Skilled worker
Centralized intake Office
Canada,
Dear Sir/Madam,
Good day.I applied under the category FSW- 1 noc.3112 General practitioner in December 2009.but unfortunately due to the shortage of points I withdrew my case and sent you a letter about my withdrawal with my new address.
In which you replied me in August 2010 and you said that I will get my refund within 8-12 weeks.Since then I haven't received anything.
I have attached your letter.
Looking forward for your kind co-operation.
Your sincerely,


Thanks once again,dear friend.

[brill]

someone reply pls.........

[Pk09]

Hi friends,
I need your assistance.
Please correct my this letter.


To,
Citizenship and Immigration,Canada
Federal Skilled worker
Centralized intake Office
Canada,
Dear Sir/Madam,
Good day.I applied under the category FSW- 1 noc.3112 General practitioner in December 2009.but unfortunately due to the shortage of points I withdrew my case and sent you a letter about my withdrawal with my new address.
In which you replied me in August 2010 and you said that I will get my refund within 8-12 weeks.Since then I haven't received anything.
I have attached your letter.
Looking forward for your kind co-operation.
Your sincerely,


Thanks once again,dear friend.

Hello brill just make necessary changes to below

Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this with reference to your earlier correspondence in August 2010 related to refund of my FSW application fee. I would like to notify your good self that the stipulated time frame for refund has  been already lapsed and unfortunately I have not received any correspondence during the period. Therefore, i would like to request to please assist me by expediting my refund. My personal details are as under for review.
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Xxxxxxxx
Kind Regards
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