we were refused 3 times i was outside Canada with him, both working outside and both with no intentions to stay in Canada at that time, just to spend Holidays with my family; i think with each application, we got better and better with proofs and letters but still in vain...the invitation letter and other documents were even notarized again in vain...so i doubt the way u write it will make a difference
what they need to see is strong ties with his country which is so hard to show; permanent job and even have ur own business might not be enough; owning land, car, going back to school could help; still, be careful what u write and how, u don't want to contradict ur sponsorship application; having ticket both ways also could help but does not guarantee anything
lastly, from my impression, they don't even look at the new proofs; if u already applied and were refused there r higher chances to b refused straight away again, just by looking over the previous application
but don't panic; if there would b emergency or u would b 8 months pregnant, maybe they would let him come to visit (i don't say to do that though)
i wish i'm wrong and u'll b the lucky ones
